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1Caernarvon Royce [Fin] Empty Caernarvon Royce [Fin] Thu Nov 26, 2015 11:16 pm

Caernarvon

Caernarvon
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Caernarvon Royce [Fin] 0D32B03ED23D436D0D782DDB5314CCC15982509D

Basic info
Name: Caernarvon 'Thomas' Royce
Age: 28
Birthday: 7/05
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height:6'2
Weight: 213lbs
Face Claim: Mysterious Stranger [Fallout]

Stats
STR:4
DEF:4
RES:2
SPT:2
Aura 175| HP125

Personality
Group: Gadgeteers
Likes:
1.) Gunsmithing.
2.) Public speaking.
3.) Being asked for help.

Dislikes:
1.) 'Boring' people.
2.) Being bored. (more than most)
3.) Defeatists.
Fears:
1.) Death
2.) Embarrassing situations
3.) Losing things that are dear to him.
Overall Personality: Caernarvon somehow manages to be both outgoing and occasionally introverted at times, depending on the situation. He's certainly rough around the edges but a generally good person once you get to know him. Has a habit of making snide remarks and generally being a snarky pain, but tends to become more likable with time... Lots of time.  
Abilities
Aura type: Healing
Aura Color: Golden yellow light.
Semblance: Utility: Infuses bullets with  powerful Ice dusts, resulting in a storm of icy, shattery, slowing, hypothermia-inducing death. [What fun!]
Item 1: Magical Armor: Wanderer's Trenchcoat. A thick, padded coat worn by Caernarvon at most times that is heavily resistant to dust attacks, especially ranged ones. Still surprisingly lightweight.
Item 2: Weapons: "The Backup Plan." A rapid-fire sub machine gun with a drum feeding system (Think Tommy Gun). Fires high velocity armor piercing rounds with superb accuracy. Can sustain fire for a very long time, especially when in short bursts.

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



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2Caernarvon Royce [Fin] Empty Re: Caernarvon Royce [Fin] Fri Nov 27, 2015 12:01 am

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Hi, I'll be your mod

Your app is good, but there's a few things that need to be changed

First, your weapon: The idea itself is a good one, but here we only start with one form to a weapon, to give somewhat of a progression. So unfortunately, I think you'll have to get rid of the bayonet and the pole extension... for now

Second, your history: You need 300 words minimum and your at 160, just need to be fleshed out a bit more.

Third, semblance: I'm not sure about the semblance for one detail... Giving an element to an ammunition is okay, it's like coating a weapon in fire, but multiple elements is unfortunately not allowed, you'll have to choose only one.

So after those little changes, you'll be good and I'll be able to approve you ^^

3Caernarvon Royce [Fin] Empty Re: Caernarvon Royce [Fin] Fri Nov 27, 2015 12:14 am

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Approved, Welcome to Syne ^^

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