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1Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Fri Jan 29, 2016 5:03 pm

Nitsua Dragedo

Nitsua Dragedo
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Basic info
Name: Nitsua John Dragedo
Age: 18
Birthday: 11/21
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus ( is a wolf faunus)
Height:6 ft 5 inches
Weight: 170 lb
Face Claim: http://tincek-marincek.deviantart.com/art/White-Angel-521184271

Stats
STR:4
DEF:3
RES:3
SPT:2
Aura 150|HP 150

Personality
Group: Warrior
Likes: Reading, Fighting, hanging out with friends, training, having a normal life.
Dislikes: Bullies, Grimm, White Fang, Himself (Sometimes).
Fears: People close to him dying, Messing up so badly that people close to him hate him, Talking about his past, That he will never find anyone who could love him.
Overall Personality: Nitsua is a nice and kind person who cares about everyone who he holds dear in his life. He is also very resourceful and a quick learner. He rarely hates anything or anybody unless they do something horrible on purpose. He is a hard worker and respects rules highly. He doesn’t care much for what have people done in the past, but more cares about them as a person. He always cracks jokes even at the most inappropriate times. He will always fight his hardest at all times, even when training. He can be tactful and clever when he wants to be, though more often than not, he just wants things to go into an all out brawl. He often blames himself for when things go from bad to worse. But all in all, you would find no better person to be fighting beside, for he will come to your rescue even if it means the cost of his own life. He will not hesitate to sacrifice himself for those he holds dear.

Abilities
Aura type: Healing
Aura Color: White
Semblance: Nitsua’s semblance is light manipulation. He can change the amount of light that goes into someone’s eye, possibly making it so they cannot see a specific color. Or in the most extreme cases, blind a person entirely so they cannot see for a specific time period or for as long as he wants, though it will not be permanent and he has to has to be able to see or people he is blinding otherwise it will wear off or not work at all. A small ball or balls of light would shoot from his eyes, though not disrupting Nitsua's sight, at the person or people he is blinding. Though the more people he blinds, the more aura it costs to use it. He could also allow it so that a person who cannot see a specific color able to see it. He could also manipulate it so that a person cannot see people at all because the light given off of them does not hit anybody’s eyes or make a light focus on a specific spot so that spot in particular is warmer. His semblance would be best used in sunlight but can use it in rooms with minimal lighting as well. Though anywhere with no light he cannot use his powers easily. This semblance can have many applications to the creative mind.

Item 1: (Weapon) The Wolf's Feast: This is Nitsua’s main weapon, it’s a claymore about 6 ft and 3 inches long ( Before someone makes a joke about it, no he is not compensating for anything). It’s hilt is about a hand and a half long with two griffins coming out of the blade, one being white and the other being black. The blade itself has a wideness of 1 ft. Around the edge of the blade is a chain with spikes, making the blade a chainsaw sword. The chain can be removed and attached back on, but can't be used as a weapon or used for much else on it's own without the sword, attacking opponents with is one of them. The blade itself is colored dark red, like the color of blood. Nitsua has a white binding that goes around the sword, protecting it from rusting or damaging.
Item 2: (Armor) Nitsua is rarely ever seen without his red jacket, and that is because it is actually magical armor in which protects him from dust attacks. He got it from Sugou, it was one of the only things left that survived the attack. It surprisingly fit perfectly on Nitsua. Some could say it’s more of a trench coat than a jacket, but the fact of the matter is, it doesn’t matter to Nitsua, he calls it his jacket. It would cover his entire body but does not cling to it. He holds it very dear to him and rarely ever takes it off.

History and Sample
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Last edited by Nitsua Dragedo on Sun Feb 21, 2016 4:16 pm; edited 5 times in total

2Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Re: Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Sun Jan 31, 2016 11:00 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Hi I'm Leena and I'll be your mod today!

Face Claim- Link to the image, please

Aura- Utility is a semblance usage not an Aura type. Easy mistake though

Semblance- No illusions, and no permanent blindness. Everything else is fine.

Item one- Being able to remove and replace the chain is a little too close to a form two, which is not allowed at start, because of the ways that can be used.i just need you to know that it wont be used for combat purposes

Just fix these small things and you should be good to go!

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3Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Updated Mon Feb 01, 2016 6:10 pm

Nitsua Dragedo

Nitsua Dragedo
I have updated the app, so when you get the chance, review it again pls. Thank you btw for reviewing the app for me.

4Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Re: Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Sat Feb 06, 2016 5:42 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Sorry for the wait, Life happened.

Okay so blinding people for as long as you want is still a little too strong. Its not that you cant do it, its that you have to pump more AP into it to keep it up. You need to be able to retain some sort of eye contact as well. cant really do much to what you can't see, you know?

You also have to make sure that anything you do is visible before hand. For example, if you are going to blind a person, the opponent needs to be able to see it, and it has to be avoidable. Ofc, if things are done in a way that it's point blank or the opponent is caught off guard, that's completely different. But every attack from anyone needs to have some sort of visual cue, for example throwing a ball of light at someone's face to blind them. Otherwise it's Autohit and therefore not allowed. So just give me some specifics on that.

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5Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Update Thu Feb 11, 2016 11:07 pm

Nitsua Dragedo

Nitsua Dragedo
Bump

6Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Re: Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Sat Feb 20, 2016 3:50 pm

Nitsua Dragedo

Nitsua Dragedo
Made a small edit here and there leena, to make it more fair and I was kina unsure about it so I just got rid of it.

7Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Re: Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Sun Feb 21, 2016 10:48 am

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
"he could cause people to see things that may not exactly be there, closer to a hologram really."

No illusions, sorry

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8Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Re: Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Sun Feb 21, 2016 4:18 pm

Nitsua Dragedo

Nitsua Dragedo
I fixed that one small edit you wanted me to do leena, now hopefully, that is the last thing I need to edit. Thank you btw for your help on this Leena

9Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Re: Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:56 pm

Nitsua Dragedo

Nitsua Dragedo
Bump

10Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Re: Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Sat Mar 05, 2016 5:12 pm

Nitsua Dragedo

Nitsua Dragedo
Bump

11Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Re: Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Thu Mar 10, 2016 6:56 pm

Nitsua Dragedo

Nitsua Dragedo
Still waiting for that approval

12Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Re: Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Sun Mar 27, 2016 2:09 pm

Nitsua Dragedo

Nitsua Dragedo
Bump

13Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Re: Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Thu Mar 31, 2016 6:17 pm

Nitsua Dragedo

Nitsua Dragedo
Bump

14Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Empty Re: Nitsua Dragedo ( Finished) Mon Apr 04, 2016 3:26 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
We have been having issues with allowing your semblance or not, admittedly.
there is no excuse for the long wait though. There is nothing specifically wrong here, so I will approve it. Just know that if something comes up we might have to look through your semblance again, fair warning.

Also, since groups have changed, we will put you in the combat major for now, and if you feel as though this doesn't fit your character, please refer to the new group registration in the news and updates forum. ^^

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