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1Cole Amaranth(Finished) Empty Cole Amaranth(Finished) Sat May 28, 2016 6:58 am

Cole Amaranth

Cole Amaranth
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Basic info
Name: Cole Amaranth
Age: 18
Birthday: August 24th
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 160 lbs
Face Claim: Main Character - FF XIV

Stats
STR: 4
DEF: 3
RES: 3
SPT: 1
Aura100|200HP

Personality
Major: Combat
Likes: Women, Music, Fighting
Dislikes: Tradition, Weaklings, Authority Figures
Fears: Failure, The Dark, Personal Attachment
Overall Personality: A Roguish charmer with an affection for women and good times, Cole acts as his conscience and code of ethics dictates with little regard for others opinions and beliefs. That's not to say he can't be understanding, rather that he prefers doing things his own way often to the exclusion of others tactics. He has a deep-seated distrust of authority and tradition, disliking the former for attempting to control him and the latter as an additional means of control; as he sees the world people should be able to govern their own lives as they see fit without laws and mores controlling them. He harbours an intense dislike for those who rely on others to the exclusion of personal development, but because of that harbours a deep-seated fear of personal failure and how that will impact him personally and the perception of him by his peers.

Abilities
Aura type: Healing
Aura Color: Duke Blue
Semblance: Aura Perception( Cole can perceive the spiritual auras and the shifting hues related to emotional states. Grimm's appear as black holes within his sensory range. Useful for tracking and investigation).
Item 1: Arash(+10 Damage, Rank 1). A Steel Composite Longbow with black leather grip. comes with a black leather back quiver that can carry 240 arrows.
Item 2: A Set of Studded Leather Armour(+10 Defense).

History and Sample
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RP Sample:



Last edited by Maester1216 on Mon May 30, 2016 5:29 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Cole Amaranth(Finished) Empty Re: Cole Amaranth(Finished) Sat May 28, 2016 12:05 pm

Cole Amaranth

Cole Amaranth
Just a wee little bump to say that he's ready for review.

3Cole Amaranth(Finished) Empty Re: Cole Amaranth(Finished) Sat May 28, 2016 3:08 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Just want to be clear that seeing one's aura =/= seeing one's semblance just by looking at them ^^ Outside that app is good.

4Cole Amaranth(Finished) Empty Re: Cole Amaranth(Finished) Sat May 28, 2016 6:50 pm

Cole Amaranth

Cole Amaranth
Now that I think about it the Semblance wouldn't be particularly useful against Grimm given they have no soul. What would be a good ability for tracking? It's a utility semblance I'd like to have for this guy(he's like a thief or a ranger in combat style).

5Cole Amaranth(Finished) Empty Re: Cole Amaranth(Finished) Sun May 29, 2016 6:25 pm

Cole Amaranth

Cole Amaranth
Bump for edits, ready for the second round of reviews(changed his semblance and Aura/Health Spread).

6Cole Amaranth(Finished) Empty Re: Cole Amaranth(Finished) Mon May 30, 2016 4:55 pm

Cole Amaranth

Cole Amaranth
Just a little bump to indicate I'm done with character edits.

7Cole Amaranth(Finished) Empty Re: Cole Amaranth(Finished) Mon May 30, 2016 5:23 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
All is good but again the semblance, sensing something three minutes ahead of time or the likes of hearing forty miles away is too difficult to keep track of. Also the fact that upping sense is essentially like an "Auto dodge." I'd recommend going back to your prior semblance, however you could mention that as grimm have no real life force/aura they appear as holes in your tracking vision. Ultimately though you do need something different to what you have now. Bump when fixed ^^

8Cole Amaranth(Finished) Empty Re: Cole Amaranth(Finished) Mon May 30, 2016 5:30 pm

Cole Amaranth

Cole Amaranth
bumped. I'm not really of the relationship between Aura's an emotional states, but I can change it if they're isn't one.

9Cole Amaranth(Finished) Empty Re: Cole Amaranth(Finished) Mon May 30, 2016 5:42 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
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