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Laxus Castrea

Laxus Castrea
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Laxus Castrea [Finished] Fairy-Tail-image-fairy-tail-36627072-538-809

Basic info
Name: Laxus Jakkaru Castrea
Age: 17
Birthday: September 8th
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus
Height: 5`7
Weight: 130
Face Claim: Jackal (Fairy Tail)

Stats
STR: 4
DEF: 2
RES: 1
SPT: 5
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Major: Dust
Likes: Animals, Candy, Weapons.
Dislikes: Grimm, Racists, Oranges.
Fears: Death, Loneliness, and Being Betrayed.
Talent: Dust Refining
Weakness Musician
Overall Personality:
Laxus cares deeply about every aspect of life, which can be observed in the fact that he treats younger kids, animals, and even elders with a high amount of compassion because of his memories of the lost love ones in his family. He demonstrates his kinder nature by putting in extra time for charity work for all types. He also enjoys mingling with citizens around the area in which his team currently operates in, though he is quickly chastised by his teammates for doing so. Laxus seems to be a good-natured person and only does what is necessary in order to keep his friends or thoughs he cares for safe from any threats that may come his way. Overall, he is very carefree and relaxed, sociable, talkative and adaptable to surrounding environment very quickly. It can be said, however, that Laxus can sometimes become too focused and absorbed in thought, leaving him to carelessly forget his surroundings, this also may lead to him feeling a sense of loneliness since he thinks that no one views life the way he does. Laxus maybe hesitant to take a life from someone/thing but will only do it if there were no other plausible options.
Abilities
Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Orangish Red
Semblance:
Aura Manipulation:
This form of aura maniuplation is different from most as it allows the sure to use their aura in ways to help them in combat or traveling. This would include shape, size, and usage changes. In Laxus particular case he is only able to preform three different versions of Aura Manipulation all capable of useful feats.

1. Flight: Laxus is able to manipulate and control and propel aura from his feet in which in turn allowing him to to reach feats similar to flight and hovering. (-10 SP Per Post.)

2. Aura Based Arrow: Laxus is also able to create arrows made of of his orangish red aura that are capable of being fire from any bow known to man. These bows when attempting to damage an opponent acts as if it were a Dust Based Attack or an Spirit Based Skill. (-20 SP Per Arrow.)

3. Aura Enhancement: Laxus is capable of surrounding his weapon or fists in this Orangish Red to increase the damage of his physical attacks by 1 STR. (-10 SP Per Attack with Enhanced Weapons)

Item 1:
Mechanical Compound Bow:
This Compound Bow appears as if it is come sort of green, black and grey mechincal contraption that ticks and fires arrows in a swift manor. But in fact this bow works more as if it was a long bow. While still having some sort of help most of the bows strength comes from the users pull and is capable of firing bows a considerable distance.  The unique thing about this bow is that the limbs of the bow have sharp serrated edges which are able to cut up close if need be.
Bow Found Here:
Item 2:
Tier One Dust: Fire Arrows
Instead of having just the tradition vial of dust, the vial has been seperated and put into ten steel plated arrows capable of setting things on fire and burning targets. While these maybe classified as dust vials, these particular arrows if the situations allows for it can be recovered but loses their ability to shoot fire until filled win additional fire dust.

History and Sample
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RP Sample:



Last edited by Laxus Castrea on Fri Mar 24, 2017 11:04 am; edited 1 time in total

2Laxus Castrea [Finished] Empty Re: Laxus Castrea [Finished] Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:39 am

Akui

Akui
Hey there Laxus! Name's Akui, and I'm going to be grading your app today.

Points from me for wielding a bow, there is just something about it that's...well, I can't explain it, but I just find bows cooler than guns.

Also, I'll have to say that at this moment and time, you have reached the limit of different things your semblance can do. Coming from someone who REALLY pushing the boundaries here when it comes to abilities on this site, I've never had a semblance do more than three things, so I would say upfront to not expect to be able to do more with it later on.

Anyone who wields Aura technically has Aura Manipulation as they are manipulating their aura to even use their own Semblance, but I understand what you are going for here: where as some people conjure fire and others heal, you pretty much just form your aura without an element.

This app is almost perfect, but I do need you to change that Aura Arrow section, as any Damage Semblance costs 20 AP per use. Also, the way to better word your buff is that you increase your STR by 1, making it 5 when active.

With those small changes, you'll be good to go! :)

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3Laxus Castrea [Finished] Empty Re: Laxus Castrea [Finished] Fri Mar 24, 2017 11:06 am

Laxus Castrea

Laxus Castrea
I am fine with those abilities being my limit :D. Although for the Aura arrows wouldnt it be more of a Utility Based then over a damage one or even both since the arrows he creates still have access to damaging capabilities? In anycase the changes were made regardless of my questions. So this is somewhat of an Approval Bump.

4Laxus Castrea [Finished] Empty Re: Laxus Castrea [Finished] Fri Mar 24, 2017 4:45 pm

Akui

Akui
While I would be fine with it only costing you 10 Aura per Supa Arrow, sadly the rules in the Aura and Semblance Section aren't on your side in this case. Damage Semblances cost 20 AP per use, while Utility (which is defined clearly as 'not falling under any of the other categories of Damage, Defense, Buffing, Debuffing, Healing, or Summons') only costs 10 AP.

Also, just for future reference, normal buffs can go up to +2 to a stat...but only one stats at a time. The reason I didn't tell you to go ahead and change your buff to a +2 is because you already have so many options, that it would kinda make you a 'Master of All Traits' versus a Jack. The buffing semblances that get a +2 don't really do anything else...I mean, you can potentially fly and shoot Supa Arrows at the same time, that's already pretty solid (please do that sometime by the way, if you get the chance? :3)

Anyway, enough chitchat about rules n' stuffz. As far as I'm concerned, this app is...

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