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1Reizā no doragon Empty Reizā no doragon Mon Jun 30, 2014 4:52 pm

Hellrocker34

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Basic info
Name: Reizā no doragon
Age:20
Birthday: 07/07
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height:6'2''
Weight:135 lbs
Face Claim:Artist unknown

Stats
STR:4
AGT:3
SPD:2
SPT:3
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Group:Warriors
Likes: Technology
            Gaming
            Faunus
            The colours yellow, blue, black, red, purple.

Dislikes: Grimm
               Boisterous people
               The colours pink, green.

Fears: Caves
             surprises
             Death
             

Overall Personality: Reizā has never really fit in with with the average crowd because he was brought up to trust no one. He prefers to not to speak to most people in the immediate vicinity because he is anxious to here the replies. Reizā prefers not to join people in missions and everyday activities because he doesn't want to commune with people. But, he believes there is room for improvement on public behavior and the liking of people because he has become accustomed to faunus and he believes he can adapt his liking for faunus, and try and like the average person.

Abilities
Aura type: Defense.
Aura Color: Electric blue with white wisps.
Semblance: Defense. Name = Dragon blink. when semblance is active he changes form, into a hardened electricity dragon (sky blue in colour). any enemy attacks are deflected off the body of the dragon. can only be used when Reizā has charged it for 2 posts. Range of semblance at 100% charged 20 meters.
Item 1: Weapon = a white bladed katana that is 26 inches long excluding handle. altogether it is 36 inches long. katana is held on the back of Reizā when not in use by a magnetic plate under the coat.
Item 2:armor = full arm metal gauntlets.

History and Sample
History:

RP Sample:



Last edited by Hellrocker34 on Tue Jul 01, 2014 1:27 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Reizā no doragon Empty Re: Reizā no doragon Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:08 pm

Leena Lilac

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Hi, I'm Leena and I'll be your mod today!

For starters, I would like to talk about your semblance. You could defend against enemy attacks, or you can teleport, but not both. At least not yet. Also, Try to avoid the use of real time. if you really want a charge time in your semblance, make it by posts. Ex/ 2 posts= full charge
And the range is ridiculously large. As a starting chara I would suggest a maximum range of 20 meters.

Next, your history is about 100 words too short. You need 300.

same goes for RP sample. you have 142 words out of 150.

Please bump when edited. ^^

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3Reizā no doragon Empty Reizā no doragon Tue Jul 01, 2014 12:21 pm

Hellrocker34

Hellrocker34
changes have been made

4Reizā no doragon Empty Re: Reizā no doragon Tue Jul 01, 2014 12:55 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
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Much better, but now your image is broken. I know it's nit picky, but I wanna see the pretty picture. :U

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5Reizā no doragon Empty Re: Reizā no doragon Tue Jul 01, 2014 1:26 pm

Hellrocker34

Hellrocker34
k. will try and fix it now

6Reizā no doragon Empty Re: Reizā no doragon Tue Jul 01, 2014 1:28 pm

Hellrocker34

Hellrocker34
fixed it

7Reizā no doragon Empty Re: Reizā no doragon Tue Jul 01, 2014 6:11 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
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Approved~

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