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1Claw Elderwood (waiting to be approve) Empty Claw Elderwood (waiting to be approve) Sat Jun 17, 2017 9:05 pm

Claw Elderwood

Claw Elderwood
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Claw Elderwood (waiting to be approve) A56984e2582c1cae3cec84f5920cdd25

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Basic info
Name: Claw Elderwood
Age: 27
Birthday: Jan,25
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'7
Weight: 212 LBS
Face Claim: Has a slit beard and the feeling of a knight round him, normal look and dark blond hair. https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/a5/69/84/a56984e2582c1cae3cec84f5920cdd25.jpg

Stats
STR: 5 (+1)
DEF: 3
RES: 2
SPT: 2
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Major: Teacher (Smith)
Likes: Brotherhood, his job, Celebrations
Dislikes: Dishonest people, Racist jerks, Bullies
Fears: Everyone he loves die, The fall of his Kingdom, No more need of him anywhere
Talent: Weapon smith
Weakness: Stealth
Overall Personality: Is this up beat guy who believes chivalry isn't dead just yet, Would always find a way to put a smile on someone's face. He will slam someones face into the ground because someone made they made a little girl cry, he will fight to the very end in battle for his friends and brotherhood. Almost everyone knows him and he takes pride in that, he is extremely brave in any situation you can put him in but would fear for the safety of someone who isn't as strong as him. He is also the biggest animal person out there, you could rarely see him walking about 12 animals at a time.


Abilities
Aura type: Strength
Aura Color: Flaming Orange
Semblance: The Hammer of Dawn: This power summons a hammer that can be thrown and exploded, the explosion is only 5 feet, it does have a chance to give an enemy a burn effect but ever so slightly, it may also be used as a normal forge hammer in which it can create weapons,armor,ect. It takes 20 SP to use and does 20 dmg when it hits someone/something, it is also a offensive semblance.
Item 1: Berdiche called The Inferno's Wrath, the weapons could melt down metal do a liquid state, used for smithing only. It is Claw's best work he had ever done (weapon design was made by Loghan Bloodfall)
Item 2: Heat resistant tech armor (for smithing not combat heat resistant)(physical armor)

History and Sample:

History:

RP Sample:



Last edited by Claw Elderwood on Thu Jun 29, 2017 2:36 pm; edited 10 times in total

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Need a Face Claim image.

Face Claim =/= Appearance description

Also, Please actually use the template code provided.

http://www.rwbyrpg.com

Claw Elderwood

Claw Elderwood
ok how is it now?

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin

Face Claim =/= Appearance description. I need an actual name to the face. Or like, a Link.

Also, Please actually use the template code provided. What happened? You've only used half of it.

http://www.rwbyrpg.com

Claw Elderwood

Claw Elderwood
how is it now?

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Can you find a better link for the FC image? It doesnt work for me

Please describe your semblance

http://www.rwbyrpg.com

7Claw Elderwood (waiting to be approve) Empty Re: Claw Elderwood (waiting to be approve) Sat Jun 24, 2017 10:41 pm

Claw Elderwood

Claw Elderwood
ok, fix the link to my pic and described my semblance a little better, how is it now

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
I'll be taking over the grading of this app

The "Talent/Weakness" and "Skillful at/Lacking skill in" are both the same thing, please remove one

Please specify that your Semblance is an Offensive semblance that does 20 damage for 20 SP

Precise which type of damage your armor defends against (Physical or Dust)

Note: Don't forget that the "metal melting" part of your weapon will no apply to combat (aura protects from wear objects link to someone) and will only be for rp flair

Bump when these changes are done

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Changes have been made, approved

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