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1Kurai Namerkana Empty Kurai Namerkana Fri Aug 01, 2014 7:26 pm

Kurai Namerkana

Kurai Namerkana
Kurai Namerkana Princeofpersianextgentaile


Info:
Name: Karai Namerkana
Age:17
Birthday:Feb 14
Gender:Male
Race:Human
Height:5'10
Weight:120 lbs
Face Claim:Prince of Persia Trilogy - The Prince

Stats:

Str:2
Agt:5
Spd:4
Spt:1
180 Hp|120 Mp

Personality:

Group:Gadgeteer
Likes:Weapons-Tinkering-Books
Dislikes:Slow Weapons-Basic Weapons- Cocky Fighters
Fears:
1.Overall the Potential of Dust
2.King Taijitu
3.Anything he can't really understand

Kurai is a calm (at most times) Gadgeteer that despite being semi-social mostly makes friends by first looking at their weapons and fighting style then making a judgement on their personality based on what they use and how they use it (yeah he's a weapon nerd). Usually a loyal friend he will always help someone in need unless he knows that trying to help would only make the situation worse. His love of weapons made him a master engineer capable of fixing most weapon malfunction even in the heat of battle. Unfortunately Kurai isn't to keen about bigger opponents and usually will sit in the side lines and wait for an opening when fighting something like a death stalker or a nevermore. HE spends most of his free time tinkering with his own or other peoples weapons. Some people mistake him for an idiot because of his personality but nevertheless he is brilliant

Abilities:

Aura Type:Speed
Aura Color:Purple
Semblance:Shadow Manipulation (Blinding Buff) Karai Creates a Pitch black cloud by tapping the earth in said cloud covers the area in pure darkness in which only Kurai (and with enough training his comrades) can see through. A side effect of this Semblance is that Kurai's eyes change color from dark blue to Turquoise.

Item 1:A Long Handled Halberd named NightFall (like this one but the blade on the left is longer and more of a crescent)Kurai Namerkana 362

Item 2:A vial of flame dust

History:
Karai Namerkana was born among the streets of downtown Bellmuse with a wrench in his hand and a sword in the other. His Father owned a small dust business on a main street in town but unfortunately when Kurai was 5 he was killed by a dust explosion during white fang robbery and what was left of the small business was bought off by the schnee dust company. His mother was a brave huntress equipped with a Fire Claymore but sadly  had died when ambushed by 2 King Taijitu. Ar this time Kurai was only 12 but the death of both his parents made him determined to become a hunter. That night after his mothers death Kurai's uncle was on his way to take him back to his home since he was practically an orphan but as he arrived he found Kurai he was Attempting to fight two Beowolve's outside of his house and was badly injured. Now Kurai's Uncle Rem was no hunter but he did own a weaponcraft shop and luckily had some of his work in the back of his car. With one shot from a musket ax a bewolf fell to the ground and the other fled. Over the years Kurai trained his fighting skills to be better than any thug or grimm that threatened what he had left of a family and at the same time he helped his Uncle in the shop and picked a wide knowledge of weapons and engineering. After all what is a great warrior without his weapon. On Kurai's 17th birthday he was enrolled into Syne academy, the exited young boy was soon on the forge perfecting the weapon he would soon use to wipe the grimm off the face of the earth. That evening while Kurai was out "testing" his new weapon Uncle Rem's shop burned down with him trapped inside. Kurai got home only to see what was left of burning rubble and debris as a shadowy figure fleeing the scene of the crime. Now all Kurai had was gone all of his family was dead and all he possessed now was his Halberd and a burning plot of land in the backstreets of Bellmusse. Syne was his chance at revenge for all that has happened to him and "NOTHING is going to take that away from me"

RP Example:
As student after student left the airship one blackish brown haired male wearing a Arabian Assassin sort of outfit ( not good at describing what it is but it's what my avatar is wearing but not pixelated )stepped out not admiring the stunning beauty of the complex crystal castle but the weapons of his piers, silently judging their personality's based one what they fought with.

"UGH! just a spear that's nothing special and EEEWWW is that a club what is this the stone age" He thought to himself as we surveyed the surrounding students. Most base weapons he found boring and even some complex weapons have trouble catching his interest sometimes although he did find some good ones in the bunch "Shotgun that looks to shoot trip mines - impressive and look a flame rapier and OH MY GOD IS THAT A CRYSTAL BUSTER SWORD!!!!"

Upon getting lost in others weapons he bumped into and knocked over a faunist girl. "O-k maby i should watch wear i'm going" He said to himself as he helped the girl up and went on with his walk "After one last scan" He Said as he looked quickly over the crowd while a one in particular caught his eye. It was a normal rectangular sheathe...yet something about it intrigued him he hadn't a clue why though.

His curiosity getting the better of him he found himself approaching the figure "umm... Hi!" he said in a curiously confident voice



Last edited by Dark_Scourge on Sat Aug 02, 2014 5:24 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Kurai Namerkana Empty Re: Kurai Namerkana Fri Aug 01, 2014 10:33 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Kurai Namerkana IbyLY2eSVixTkG

Admin Eli here to grade your app today!

Alright! So so far I have 2 tiny issues with your app and 2 larger ones.

1: You've got a tiny spelling error in the last sentence of your personality. (I know I know, I'm totally a grammar nazi.) Just turn "i" to "is" and I won't make fun of you!

2: I personally would prefer the name of the specific skin for your FC so we have something to reference and put into our records 'n' such.


Now to the non pet peeve issues.

1: Your items can only be weapons/shields/and dust in your app. So for item 2 I recommend a shield or dust, as the toolbox is not allowed.

2: The minimum length of your history is 300 words, you have 248, just add a bit more onto it and it will be all gravy!


Bump this thread when you've made the necessary changes!

(PS. I'm alright with the minecraft avatar, but if you happen to find a non minecrafty one that fits quite well I recommend switching it and updating your FC. Or you could stick with that and we can just nickname you "Blocky Paul" or something~!)

3Kurai Namerkana Empty Re: Kurai Namerkana Sat Aug 02, 2014 4:38 am

Kurai Namerkana

Kurai Namerkana
I completed all the changes necessary Eliara-chan

4Kurai Namerkana Empty Re: Kurai Namerkana Sat Aug 02, 2014 5:03 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Alright, just 2 tiny issues and one larger one left!

1: For the Face Claim, we'd prefer it if you put it as such. (I did the research a bit for ya so just copy/paste ^.^) The Prince - Prince of Persia.

2: For your dust vials, you need to pick a basic element that the dust is such as Fire/Earth/Water/Wind, pick one out of any of those and you will be good to go~!


1L: You need at least three fears listed, it can be simple ones like heights and drowning, or it could be something more complex if you wish it to be.

5Kurai Namerkana Empty Re: Kurai Namerkana Sat Aug 02, 2014 5:25 pm

Kurai Namerkana

Kurai Namerkana
once again problems have been fixed

6Kurai Namerkana Empty Re: Kurai Namerkana Sun Aug 03, 2014 3:53 am

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Kurai Namerkana Eli_ap10

Now get out there and RP!

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