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1Zenith Oreol Empty Zenith Oreol Wed Oct 01, 2014 6:40 pm

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
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Basic Info
Name: Zenith Oreol
Age: 17
Birthday: March 27
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus
Height: 5'9
Weight: 155 lbs.
Face Claim: 
Konoe [Lamento]
Jaguar Faunus, Black Furry Ears, Eyes change to the Color Red when Angered or going Crazy:

Stats
STR: 4
RFX: 3 [+1 Due to Speed Type Aura] 4
SPD: 4 [+1 Due to Speed Type Aura] 5
SPT: 1
Aura 200|100 HP

Personality
Group: Researchers
Likes:

  • Thinking
  • Chess
  • Relaxing
  • Music
  • Dancing



Dislikes: 

  • Ignorant People
  • GRIMM
  • Racists
  • Arrogant People
  • Dust Users



Fears: 

  • Death
  • People Smarter than himself
  • Extremists [Not the Group]
  • People getting close to him [Not much for friends]


Overall Personality: You can say that Zenith is the type of person who is cunning and calculative, Zenith tends to split himself between two personalities: One that is tender and caring to those close to him [whoever actually manages to get close to him], and another that is much more common to those who are not close to Zenith: Cold, Blunt, Silent and somewhat...cruel. Zenith is extremely if not impossibly difficult to get along with, at least when you meet him for the first time in school, or outside of classes; equipped with a Semi-Short Temper and Smart Mouth towards even the tiniest of details of a person or thing. Zenith holds no respect for those who rely on using Dust as Weapon that is not in it's Raw Form (though he used Dust to Enchant his Weapon ironically). When Zenith is in Combat, he tends to dismiss any kind of differences between himself and other people in his team in order to utilize everybody's strengths to their fullest potential, even the Dust Users which shows, while at the same time taking note of the enemies group size, tactics and possible patterns to decipher an exact counter-strategy against the opposition. This shows that due to even Zenith's personality and cold demeanor, he is flexible in combat and essentially even people who rely on brute strength alone, or Dust alone from his hometown fear Zenith unconditionally.

Abilities
Aura Type: Speed
Aura Color: Snow White, though when Angered [or goes a little Crazy] it changes to Pitch Black mixed with Blood Red.
Semblance: Dusk Discharge- This Semblance bears complete control over the Shadows. This Semblance is the more Dangerous Side of Zenith, in terms of offensive power, it is what makes Zenith so deadly, anything with a Shadow is considered to be Zenith's weapon. Whether it be from another person,, himself, objects, even falling leaves and splattered blood become weapons due to their shadow showing. This allows Zenith to utilize the Shadows in a violent manner, usually crafting solid spikes to pierce through the enemies defenses and literally render them helpless in almost every form of combat, as well as creating miniature platforms from under, behind or in front of the enemy to essentially get out of sticky situations while making a quick stun against them.


At points as well, Zenith is able to use his Semblance on his own Dust-Enchanted Right Gauntlet to envelop it around a Circular Shield in order to use it as:

  1. A Buzz Saw that can cut through literally just about anything. AND/OR
  2. A miniature Getsugatensho-related Attack that essentially has the same properties as the Buzz Saw variant, except can be used in both 180 Degree and 360 Assaults.


Weapon 1: Set of Gauntlets, Conclusive Adjudicators.

  • The Left Gauntlet is simply a type of stun weapon for those people who manage to get close to Zenith, generating electricity enough to render an individual without mobility ranging from a few seconds to about 24 hours.

Weapon 2: 

  • The Right Gauntlet, seemingly normal contains a Mirror on the forearm part of the Gauntlet that is capable of deflecting just about if not every Light and Laser-type Weapon/Attack naturally due to being like a mirror. Granting very powerful defense against practically any Dust-related attack.
  • The right gauntlet of the Conclusive Adjudicators is also made from the most durable type of clear metal known to the world at the time while being enchanted by Dust at the same time. This allows the Mirror-like piece of Gauntlet to be flexible and durable while being able to shift forms, from Regular Gauntlet to a Circular Shield that can be used to deflect a wider-range of Dust, Light and Laser related attacks.


History and Sample
History:


When it came to pass, Zenith created Gauntlets that had no use of Dust within their functions, however it was known to his parents and the weapon manufacturer that the Gauntlet was enchanted by Dust. Due to the family history, Zenith’s Father wanted to teach how to fight person to person before he was to take the entrance exam in Syne Academy. However, what his father saw in Zenith’s combat ability was far beyond what he was expecting. The intelligence and power were at extremely high levels and thus, Zenith was essentially feared by everybody in his birth city of Atlas. Before Zenith had left to take his entrance exam in Syne Academy, the prejudice and violence towards his family had seemingly stopped after many years of abuse. Now with the prejudice against Zenith and his family out of the way, it was time for Zenith to step into Syne Academy to take the Entrance Exam and prove his strength to everyone around him.

RP Sample:


Zenith then simply rose from the lone chair that he was sitting on in the room, more sounds then clicked off during the echoing of the alarm, the first was a lighter one being the chair dipping into the floor. Another which was much heavier symbolized that the platform Zenith was standing upon had begun to rise up into a bright light, the room that would be Zenith;s Entrance Exam. In response to this, Zenith had let his gauntlets activate and take form around his entire forearm as the platform was rising up. The serene and relaxing moments before the Entrance Exam were about to be replaced by a violent ordeal that would determine whether or not Zenith is admitted into Syne Academy.

"For my family." Zenith immediately said to himself in a cold tone, as the platform had finally reached it's destination; Zenith was able to see a crowd of people towards the upper half of the large and spacious room, people who had already taken the test and are awaiting their results, while at the same time there are others who are awaiting their turn in the Entrance Exam. However, one thing was in common between all of these people: that was that they were all gauging out their competition, namely the rumors of Zenith Oreol had sprung all the way to even the Entrance Exam itself. Now taking one brief scan around the room, Zenith takes note of the Monitors on all four sides of the room, in order to allow people to view his combat prowess and Entrance Exam, at least for those who were not able to see the room clearly. 

Doors from all four wings of the gran, white lit room had opened up and a swarm of Humanoid Robots flooded out into the room from the forsaken doors, and all were programmed to kill their target on sight. "Now the fun begins." Zenith stated with a firm and icy voice, many shadows have appeared in the premises, though he had decided that for mean time it was not necessary to do something extremely dangerous and stupid at the given time. Zenith then heard the sounds of lasers being fired from the East Wing towards him. *Whirr-click* Zenith's gauntlet had engaged a shield that was designed specifically to reflect any projectile that happened to be laser, light or dust related straight back towards the enemy at twice or three times the intended carnage. *Boom-clank* the swarm of Robots on the East Wing had all be decimated, *Buurr-thud* the East Wing Door had slammed shut. 

Murmuring could now be portrayed as Zenith had briefly scanned the premises and had pulled the trigger on his gauntlet [triggered by his aura] to launch a ray of white hot, piercing light towards the West Wing of the swarm almost instantly after he had decimated the entire East Wing. While making the chain explosions destroy the entire West Wing was viable, the North and South Wings of the room were intact and quickly closing in on Zenith.

"Tch, well things are gonna get messy from here on out..." Zenith whispered under his breath as he flicked his shield mounted gauntlet to allow a White Ray of Light to envelop his weapon in order to allow it to act as a sort of buzz saw to slice up some of the danger in the premises. *Grrr* the low growl of Zenith's Jaguar Genes had show itself as he began rushing towards the North Wing that was closing in with the South Wing at an intense speed only Jaguar's could actually run at. The moment Zenith had arrived there, he swung his right arm while spinning a full 360 Degrees Clockwise to allow the buzz saw-like light to extend and shoot out violently towards both the North and South Wings, in which all but two Humanoid Robots from each side had unfortunate encounter with as they were sliced in half and exploded in the process. The remaining four Humanoid Robots had begun charging towards Zenith as a smirk had appeared on his face, "It's showtime!" Zenith said happily, though with a kind of maniacal type of voice while his Aura showing had changed from Snow White to a Pitch Black mixed with Bloody Red, signifying that the most dangerous part of Zenith has yet to be shown.

Zenith immediately triggered his shield mounted gauntlet and pointed it up towards the one giant light bulb above them all. Firing away at the light bulb, expressions of disbelief could be seen on the faces of the people watching, and especially to the ones who had already taken their exam. *Snicker-Cackle* the laughing of Zenith could be heard as the Bloody Red mix of the Aura was the only visible thing, then all of a sudden, clashes of lightning and fists were resonating around the room, *Buzz, thud, clank* the battle sounds were intense, to the point of where the four red eyes of the Humanoid Robots and the Bloody Red Aura of Zenith Oreol were moving so fast it was almost a blur.

Zenith decided to finally use the shadows to his advantage, namely...the entire dark room and what could be seen were legitimate pitch black platforms rising up from within the darkness from behind and under the Robots, throwing them off balance and allowing Zenith to utilize the white light buzz saw launchign strategy on two of them which for just a brief second; the crowd was able to see the decimation of two more Humanoid Robots in hand to hand combat. When the light had dissipated once more, sparks of electricity followed immediately where Zenith had delivered a devastating blow to the final two heads of the Humanoid Robots secretly and with such speed, it were as if Zenith had traveled through the shadows to ambush them and disappeared back into them.


When all was said and done, Zenith shined his White Light on the shield mounted gauntlet and let it revert back into a regular gauntlet form on his forearm. "Ummm, do you guys have Emergency Lights? I need to find an exit to relax now." Zenith said jokingly though with a tone so serious, people couldn't tell what kind of power this..."monster" had stored within himself to do all of this without being touched, literally. The emergency lights were lit on and the first thing everybody saw was Zenith standing the center of the room with all of the pieces of exploded and sliced up Humanoid Robots. A door opened up South of Zenith, and he calmly walked towards that direction to make his way into the crowd to find a lone chair for him to sit on, and relax for the rest of the day.



Last edited by AncientHalo on Mon Oct 13, 2014 12:45 pm; edited 7 times in total

2Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Thu Oct 02, 2014 4:29 pm

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
Can I please NOT be forced to have 1 Stat Point in SPT? I feel like there's NO NEED for my Character to have that 1 Point if he never will use Dust.

3Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Thu Oct 02, 2014 8:42 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Hi! I'm Leena and I'll be your mod today~

First off, to answer your question, You do need that one minimum point. Reason being is that Spirit not only refers to The damage used with dust, but also refers to defense AGAINST dust. So even if you don't use dust, it is important to have when facing off against someone who does use dust. I hope that makes some sense.

Alright, now to the grading.

I am not particularly strict on what your semblance can do, but it does need to have a single primary function, at least at start. It is possible to upgrade later. As it stands, your semblance can be used as transport (utility), as a weapon (offensive), and as a shield (defensive). That right there is 3 of the 4 semblance classes all in one, which I cannot allow at start. Please Simplify it for the time being. This is a school, let us teach you to be stronger, haha.

Also, you do need a second item. This can be some sort of armor or shield, since you have already expressed that you will not be using dust. (That bit I am admittedly VERY strict about, sorry.)

Sorry for the ear eye full. Bump when done~

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4Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Fri Oct 03, 2014 12:00 pm

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
The thing is, with Dust, the weapon I created is literally screaming: Anti-Dust User. Ehhh, the Transport I can live without, I don't see how the Semblance is used for Defense because the only other thing I use it for is Combat and literally decimating competition xD

The Spirit I feel like is not needed, and my Character honestly.....doesn't use Shields and Armor, reason being that his Right Gauntlet already comes with a Shield, armor would just slow my RPC Down in terms of Combat Prowess, so I feel like it's not needed on him. I do want to put a 2nd Weapon on him, but for later purposes because they're technically gonna be Ignacy's Secondary Weapon lol.

---Edit---

After checking my Semblance I saw the whole using it for Defense Mechanism, that was meant to be used in terms of Offensive Combat to stun the opponent and gain quick distance.

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Other than that, Bump!

5Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Sat Oct 04, 2014 9:12 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Like i said, you do not need to be a dust user to need spirit. 0 spirit means a potential insta KO from an enemy dust user. It is in the same way that if you had a 0 in brawn (STR), not only would your attacks do no damage what so ever, you would have NO defense against any physical attack. You'd be putty.

As for the second item, you actually cannot have more than one weapon, considering the fact that weapons change forms down the line. That is why the second item needs to be dust or shield or armor, even if you never use it. Get the vials of dust and throwthem away, get the shield and leave it a home. but you do need to fill the second item slot. Sorry. >.<

Also, something I neglected to point out (my bad), History does need to be 300 words long.

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6Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Sun Oct 05, 2014 1:19 pm

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
Meh whatever,, I guess just Random armor.will do. And my history avtually is wwell.....mlre than 300 words, I checked on Microsoft Word, jist over 300 wordsNow the tthing woth my Weapon though...again, is that it is ANTI Dust user, meaning I made it specifically to counter dist users in combat, but can still fight everything else.

also in Rwby itself....The only character I see with 2 actual items are Weiss and Jauane (Sword and Vials, Sword and Shield)

7Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Mon Oct 06, 2014 1:11 am

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
You seem to be misunderstanding me, which is probably on me. I have no issue with your weapon. In fact your weapon IS the two items, a stun gun and a shield. Just move the Desc of one of the gauntlets to the second item slot. Though, the shield cannot to damage. Well, I guess it could, if you hit someone with it, but it wouldn't do as much as an actual weapon and instead be determined by brawn.

As for your history, when I previously checked it into the word counter it said 164 words. I was highlighting it from the bottom. This time, I happened to highlight from the top, and when I clicked above the paragraph, a second paragraph appeared above the one i originally saw. Ive never seen that happen before, but it did bring your wordcount to 311 words. Sorry about that.

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8Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Mon Oct 06, 2014 3:17 pm

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
It's fine, and well the Shield isn't supposed to be right there outside lol. It's a Mirror on the Gauntlet at first to shoot out Light Rays [Triggered by my Aura], and the shield doesn't do Damage Physically; rather it absorbs anything Light, Laser AND Dust Related and reflects it back whenever I choose to, for either twice or three times the amount of power, depending on how my character is feeling [Hoping that's fine with you since I did say my Weapon was an Anti-Dust User thing].

And as for the actual Weapon being 2 Weapons, that is completely fine with me ^.^ lolz, alright I'll edit that around and I'll bump it once more for approval.

9Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Mon Oct 06, 2014 3:30 pm

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
And now we Bump one more time

10Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Tue Oct 07, 2014 10:22 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
I don't really get the part about the shield being able to shoot out light. First of all, if it is being classified as a shield, then it needs to be just that-- a shield. It cant be used offensively as a primary tactic. If you want to go with the mirror thing, the damage output would have to be reduced to half of your own strength. But with the light bit, you say its triggered by your aura, but your semblance is of darkness. While it is possible to have more than one semblance, that is for later down the road, not at start.

"And as for the actual Weapon being 2 Weapons, that is completely fine with me ^.^ lolz, alright I'll edit that around and I'll bump it once more for approval."
^ you misunderstood. My suggestion was ONE weapon and a shield. In fact, I'm not sure why you have "weapon 1" and "weapon 2" when in the template it says "Item 1" and "Item 2"

Sorry about the miscommunications we seem to be having. I really hope I can start to make some sense soon.

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11Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Wed Oct 08, 2014 11:35 am

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
Actually, I originally had his semblance to be Control over Light and Darkness. Light used by the Shield to channel it into offensive maneuvers, if anything I will change the light part to darkness used by the shield.

12Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Sat Oct 11, 2014 2:41 am

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Alright, as we previously discussed, you can have a shield that reduces damage from dust, but not a shield with the mirror effect. Also, You do need to make anything triggered by your aura match the semblance you have typed out on the Application.

Also, and this was completely over looked, i'm sorry, Can you tell me what game or anime your Face Claim is from? or at least if it was an Original Character, the source? (unless you made it yourself in which case I am impressed, but it needs to say so, haha.)

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13Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Sat Oct 11, 2014 2:11 pm

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
Yeah I'll fix that up, I've been busy making other Character Apps for other Roleplays, Pokemon, SAO and etc. But I'll get to it whenever I can [hopefully right now]

14Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Sat Oct 11, 2014 2:20 pm

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
It's fixed now, yay me ^.^

15Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Sat Oct 11, 2014 6:34 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
AncientHalo wrote:capable of deflecting just about any Dust, Light or Laser Related weapon.

^this is the bit I'm talking about that needs to go. Your shield can be a mirror if it wants to be but it does not act like one, at least not at start. It instead reduces damage from dust, as opposed to deflecting it.

Also, Due to my superior Googling skills, I have deduced that your Face Claim is Konoe from a manga series called Lamento.

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16Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Mon Oct 13, 2014 12:06 pm

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
Well I had no idea actually that the picture was from that Manga o.o lol I guess I'll fix that up.

Ummm, I mean....don't Mirrors NATURALLY have the ability to reflect light and lasers at the least? It's natural even in real life they can bounce them back, because Lasers are Light affiliated. Something I guess that could talked about.

Dust wise, yeah I can take that off lmao till later on when I upgrade it.

17Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Mon Oct 13, 2014 9:16 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Well, sure the light itself can be reflected, but if it was an attack the attack will still go through, and anything "bounced back" would do no damage.

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18Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Wed Oct 15, 2014 3:11 pm

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
Fixed

19Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Thu Oct 16, 2014 11:14 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Okay, I'm not seeing much difference to be honest. You would still get hit by light and/or Laser based attacks. They would still do damage. The only thing you are defended against is specifically Dust. Attacks caused by weapons and such are not defended against by anything except your STR stat. As such, you do need to remove and/or change "Gauntlet that is capable of deflecting just about if not every Light and Laser-type Weapon/Attack naturally due to being like a mirror" and "a Circular Shield that can be used to deflect a wider-range of Dust, Light and Laser related attacks."

Yes. Light itself would naturally be reflected in a mirror, but it has nothing to do with the attack as a whole. It would still go through if not defended by anything else. For example, if an opponent had a gun that shot lasers, Your shield cannot do much against it. It would be like the impact itself still hurts you. However, If someone threw a bright flash of fire dust at you, you shield would be able to nerf the damage, as that it what its designed for, if that makes sense.

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20Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Tue Nov 04, 2014 3:56 pm

Rei Hikari

Rei Hikari
I'm gonna scrap this character sheet, but just keep it here for now, I'm gonna copy the RP Sample for the new App

21Zenith Oreol Empty Re: Zenith Oreol Tue Nov 04, 2014 9:28 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Alright, ill move it to inactive though, but you will still be able to access it.

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