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1Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ on Wed Mar 18, 2015 2:04 am

Tomoe Kisaragi
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Basic info
Name: Tomoe Kisaragi
Age: 16
Birthday: 2/13
Gender: Female
Race: Faunus
Weight: 125lbs
Face Claim:Tomoe, Criminal Girls Invite Only

Aura 200|100 HP


  • Attention
  • Hot Springs
  • Sewing


  • Ignorance
  • Bullying
  • Taken Advantage of


  • Abandonment
  • Ignored
  • Spiders

Overall Personality: Tomoe Kisaragi gentle girl who unknowingly charms everyone around her with her sweet demeanor and personality. Tomoe is clumsy and a airhead at times, but through all that her mother like speaking and her level headed attitude is what attracts many to her. Like a moth to a flame. Like a flame, she can also burn those who think that they can use her to their profit. Although she seem easily taken advantage of, she has her own kind of playfulness to her personality. A playfulness akin to a tiger playing with her prey. Self-training in swordsmanship, but always used as a last resort. Words instead of swords drawn is her first action.

Aura type: Power
Aura Color: Purple
Semblance: Wind. With the power of wind, Tomoe can do a multiple of things. By enveloping herself she can decrease/increase the wind resistance around herself. While enveloping her weapon, she can make the weapon reach further of 5 inches , increases the ease of slicing through the air, even increasing the sharpness of her weapon.

Item 1: Weapon: Katana with a sheath.The Katana itself is a collapsible blade of 27 inches.

Item 2: Dust: Wind Tier One

History and Sample
Tomoe grew up with many titles and tags stuck on her. Many that were true. Many that were false. Spoiled is what one will say if they saw her life with her family, however it is them that showers her with praises and gifts when she only wants to sew in peace. Vixen is what the ladies mark her as even before they know her, the very same ones that preach that 'don't judge a book by it's cover'. Motherly is what her friend categorize her as, even if she heavily denies it, because her mother like reactions towards many things. Don't get her wrong the attention, good or bad, has always followed her more so as she grew older. Even then, a relaxing trip to the hot springs is something she treasures greatly. Her father taught her how to fight off anyone what try to force themselves on her. Her mother taught her how to use her words as well to defend, attack, and help others. Having many siblings taught her to responsibility.

With the many lessons taught to her, all she now is missing is the experience and real life application. Night by night, she would sneak out to practice her swordsmen ship against near by lone grimm. Months crawled by. During the nights, Tomoe gained more and more experience with her swordsmen ship, during one of these nights of fighting, she discovered her Semblance; wind. All the while during the day, she went with her mother to the marketplace and practiced her use of words on the business men and women, against bullies she see within the shadows of the ally ways, thugs that attempt to mug them. Everyone was used for her experience and application. Humans and Fannus used to practice her weapons taught by her mother. Gimm used to practice her weapon finesse taught by her father.
RP Sample:
The evening air was unnaturally cold, the lights of the houses cast light upon the streets. Slowly they grew while the night slowly envelopes us, children with their family poured out into the streets and roads. I watched them have their fun within this night “Why” I thought “Don’t they understand it is not safe going out at a night like this?” I looked up toward the crimson moon slowly moving across the night. I walked down the streets, avoiding the families and friends.  

Suddenly a loud growl rang through the night then followed by a blood-chilling cry and ended with a death claiming cough. All I  could think was “its time for them to come out,” I ran toward the way of the sounds, the place it took me was within a graveyard. Then I spotted the bloodless, lifeless body, and I had no choice but to bury it. “Next, time you guys do that again,” I said out loud, while digging a new hole for the body, “Keep the mouth shut, or else I must teach you all a lesson.”  The five shadowy figures bowed down to me, and said “Please forgive us we couldn’t wait. ” After I finished burying the body “It does not matter, now” I looked  up toward the crimson moon “let us hunt.” We all walked out of the graveyard, and began the destruction of  the town, and our bath in human blood.

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2Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ on Wed Mar 18, 2015 8:55 pm

Eliara Caithe
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Admin Eli here! Let's have a look at that app of yours~!

Semblances are rather specialized abilities and therefore are limited to one kind of function. It cannot be a buff and an attack semblance, it's one or the other. Also a buff semblance can only buff one of your stats (STR, DEF, RES, and SPT), it cannot buff speed. Also a little more description on what it does would be nice. How does the wind help you. Do you take it inside you, does it swirl around you, what color is it?

I need a little more description on your weapon. Weapons are as unique and varied as the individuals that wield them. What makes your Katana special? What does it look like? Does it have any extra abilities to it?

Bump when finished making your changes~!

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3Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ on Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:11 pm

Eliara Caithe

"Just fix the buff on your semblance for now and describe it a bit more and we'll work from there, still not completely sure on the "Semblances can be only one kind of function."

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4Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ on Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:25 pm

Tomoe Kisaragi
Like this? and BUMPS~

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5Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ on Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:44 pm

Eliara Caithe
Semblance: Speed is no longer a stat, if you wanna buff yourself it needs to be one of your four stats. (STR, DEF, RES, and SPT)

Weapon: You start off with a tier one weapon with one form, until you upgrade it later it can only be a sword or a rifle. Not both, you can get both later once you've upgraded your weapon after your char is approved! ^.^

Bump when edited~

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6Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ on Tue Mar 24, 2015 11:25 am

Tomoe Kisaragi
BUmp BUmp in the the Dark?

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7Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ on Tue Mar 24, 2015 7:40 pm

Eliara Caithe
One last thing I just realized you need to do, sorry for not telling you earlier! : (

Semblance: I need a range for your weapon extension, how far can the wind extend your blade? I recommend keeping it at a reasonable distance, not something silly like 10 meters (33 feet)

This should be the final thing I need you to do and then you're approved!

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8Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ on Tue Mar 24, 2015 10:58 pm

Tomoe Kisaragi

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9Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ on Wed Mar 25, 2015 7:01 pm

Eliara Caithe
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10Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ Empty Re: Tomoe Kisaragi Complete~ on Wed Mar 25, 2015 9:37 pm

Oliver Balcross
Before any final approvements are made. Because this is a mandatory thing.

What makes Tomoe a faunus?

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