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1Angel Harushi Empty Angel Harushi Fri May 13, 2016 2:20 am

Angel

Angel
Angel Harushi 4eaade37d3e7e7ef1a7b096cf7e813a1
Basic info
Name: Angel Harushi
Age: 19
Birthday: June 1st
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 100 pounds
Face Claim: Soul caliber: Talim  

Stats
STR: 4
DEF: 2
RES: 4
SPT: 2
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Major: Dust
Likes:
- Reading
- Music
- Being alone
Dislikes:
- Killing
- Rudeness
- Unnecessary shouting  
Fears:
- Dying
- Bugs
- Being lost
Overall Personality:  Angel is a laid back kind of person but does not speak that much to people. She loves to play piano because her mother taught it to her she is mostly shy but hates to be rude so she will smile and go along with anything some might say she is a push over and she would agree she just can't say no until she is pushed over the limit where she goes nuts screaming and yelling and in battle Angel is a sneaky fast fighter and wont hold back.  She uses her surroundings to fight since she is a very smart girl and a force to not be reckoned with her can be fierce one day than non-talkative the next. Angel is a very moody girl and her friends laugh at her cause of it but she doesn't care she just wants to go home and sleep because it wasn't worth her time. Her flaw is she can get too worked up to the point of laziness or just too focused to see what is going on that is what makes her a decent hunter neither the best or the worst.

Abilities
Aura type: Spirit
Aura Color: Magenta
Semblance: Angel's semblance makes her eyes glow blue and a thick fog is made making it hard to see except for Lara where she uses this to her advantage and strikes her opponent
Item 1: Weapon: Tonfa blades that can retract to a non harm able form or she cant switch it to blades for killing grim.
Item 2: Standard water dust

History and Sample

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Last edited by Lara Naruzaki on Wed Jun 01, 2016 5:47 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Angel Harushi Empty Re: Angel Harushi Wed Jun 01, 2016 4:55 pm

Jet Jeyson

Jet Jeyson
Hello!

So you have one point extra in your stats, I'm assuming it's from your aura type, but I'd rather you don't put it there to avoid confusion.

Your story is also too short, it has to be 300 words minimum. Other than that everything seems fine ^^

3Angel Harushi Empty Re: Angel Harushi Wed Jun 01, 2016 5:31 pm

Angel

Angel
I edited it

4Angel Harushi Empty Re: Angel Harushi Wed Jun 01, 2016 5:42 pm

Jet Jeyson

Jet Jeyson
Good for the story, but please remove the extra point from your SPT. You will of course count it when you make your damage calculation but to avoid confusion, either write 2+1 or just 2 in your SPT stat :)

5Angel Harushi Empty Re: Angel Harushi Wed Jun 01, 2016 5:48 pm

Jet Jeyson

Jet Jeyson
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