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1rechazo Crystal Empty rechazo Crystal Thu Jun 26, 2014 6:33 pm

talontail26

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rechazo Crystal ____shinta_uchiha____by_sayurisenju-d42b04z"

Basic info
Name: Rechazo Crystal
Age: 19
Birthday: 10/2
Gender:male
Race: Faunus
Height:6'1"
Weight: 140 lbs.
Face Claim:shinta uchiha by sayurisenju

Stats
STR: 3
AGT: 2
SPD: 4
SPT: 3
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Group: Warriors
Likes:
Night time
Cool winds
Ice cream
Gemstones
Dislikes: Arrogance
The color blue
Loud sounds
mistreatment of Faunus'

Fears:
Losing friends (To death)
Abandoned cities
Needles
Overall Personality:Rechazo is a quiet kind of guy with trust issues towards humans, reasonable considering the animosity between humans and faunus. Rechazo is often sarcastic in his responses if he even gives one and is all in all, rather lazy. There are times when Rechazo will blow his lid, usually at things he dislikes or hates like the mistreatment of faunus. On the rarely seen side of him, Rechazo has a very serious mindset and is devoted to helping his friends. With this in mind anyone who crosses his precious people with malicious intent, is a dead man walking. Rechazo is also a firm believer that the ends don't justify the means in most cases.

Abilities
Aura type: power
Aura Color: purple with black wisps
Semblance: Chrysalis, the ability to coat his weapon with layers of crystal to make it sturdier. Increases damage by +20
Item 1: Weapon: Kusarigama (one-handed scythe attached to a chain, can be thrown or used in close range combat) with a black blade and a handle wrapped in purple bandages. The chain extends itself to the length wanted by the wielder
Item 2: Armor: Purple crystalline arm bracers that Rechazo uses

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by talontail26 on Sun Jul 06, 2014 9:27 am; edited 6 times in total

2rechazo Crystal Empty Re: rechazo Crystal Sat Jun 28, 2014 1:08 pm

Leena Lilac

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Hello! Welcome to RWBYRPG~
I'm Leena and I'll be your mod today~

Id like to start by saying that you need to replace the instructions on the app with your answers. I think what happened was that you put the answers inside the bold tabs.

Next, your overall personality is 2 words short. Just two, so it shouldn't be hard to fix.

Now your weapon. Because it has two different elements to attack with, the scythe and mace ball weight thing, I'm gonna ask that you choose one. Weapons get another form at rank 3.

Your History is also short on words, missing about 80~ish words.

Just fix those things and Bump. ^^

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3rechazo Crystal Empty Re: rechazo Crystal Sun Jun 29, 2014 10:56 am

talontail26

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have made the requested changes. Hope it pleases you.

4rechazo Crystal Empty Re: rechazo Crystal Sun Jun 29, 2014 1:41 pm

Leena Lilac

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Looks good, though I do Have one last question. When you say that your weapon becomes sturdier with your semblance, Is it meant as a defensive thing, or would it add to the damage that your weapon can do. Either one is fine (though personally I don't see how it would work defensively since if someone hits your weapon you don't really take damage anyway).

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5rechazo Crystal Empty Re: rechazo Crystal Sun Jun 29, 2014 3:28 pm

talontail26

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have changed to specify an offensive bonus. hope the percentage is ok.

6rechazo Crystal Empty Re: rechazo Crystal Sun Jun 29, 2014 4:09 pm

Leena Lilac

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The 20 is fine, but technically it would not be 20%, but instead +20 to total damage dealt. Sorry for the confusion and my own nit-pickiness.

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7rechazo Crystal Empty Re: rechazo Crystal Sun Jul 06, 2014 9:28 am

talontail26

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have made the requested changes. sorry it took so long, I've been having internet issues.

8rechazo Crystal Empty Re: rechazo Crystal Sun Jul 06, 2014 11:12 am

Leena Lilac

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Approved!

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