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1Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Sun Jun 12, 2016 6:15 pm

Dracul

Dracul
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Basic info :
Name: Dum (doom) Prinosyashchiy
Age: 19
Birthday: 6/6
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'7
Weight: 287 LBS
Face Claim: Doom Guy (doom 4) https://encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTS47TA1T3o0Y4UR7lwjo-I2eHPHI3zM2LzITJIqDFyUNMEMU6xcg

Stats :
STR: 5+1
DEF: 4
RES: 2
SPT: 1
Aura 100|200 HP

Personality
Major: combat major
Likes: silence, fighting a lot of people, his weapon
Dislikes: people, peace protest, and people picking on those's who are weak
Fears: himself, old master, and being weak
Overall Personality: though rarely talks he has a short temper, cold heart and will destroy anything that gets in his way. He never lets others push him mainly because you know his ridicules height and strength. He doesn't care for anyone human, faunus, or andriod he just doesn't like anyone. His size make him hungry a lot but only if he is beaten senseless which is rare for him. He is a rock when i comes to drama, put him in any situation with drama in it and he isn't faced because of it or any thing in that matter just stands there looking at you like a attention seeking child.

Abilities
Aura type: Power
Aura Color: jet Black
Semblance: electric manipulation i can control electricity
Item 1: arm blade claws (flaming ice storm talons) blade design for three elements but only uses one at a time.
Item 2: Doom bringer armor: Armor made for combat for being physical armor.

History and Sample :

History:
History:


RP Sample:
RP Sample:



Last edited by Dum Prinosyashchiy on Mon Jun 13, 2016 1:46 pm; edited 15 times in total

2Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Sun Jun 12, 2016 6:19 pm

Liona Mimiko

Liona Mimiko
History and Sample seem to be missing, please include them in your application

3Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Sun Jun 12, 2016 7:03 pm

Dracul

Dracul
DONE

4Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Sun Jun 12, 2016 7:08 pm

Liona Mimiko

Liona Mimiko
Please use the complete Template Code

5Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Sun Jun 12, 2016 7:17 pm

Dracul

Dracul
am i done now

6Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Sun Jun 12, 2016 7:43 pm

Liona Mimiko

Liona Mimiko
Please use the complete template code.

7Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Sun Jun 12, 2016 8:06 pm

Dracul

Dracul
ok is it good now?

8Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Sun Jun 12, 2016 8:46 pm

Liona Mimiko

Liona Mimiko
Item 1 cannot change form like that

I dont like calling things "unbreakable"? @item 2

Also you have some broken codes around personality

9Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Sun Jun 12, 2016 11:13 pm

Dracul

Dracul
is it ok now

10Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Mon Jun 13, 2016 12:10 am

Liona Mimiko

Liona Mimiko
Semblance cant be multielement, please pick one

11Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Mon Jun 13, 2016 12:17 am

Dracul

Dracul
edited

12Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Mon Jun 13, 2016 10:42 am

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Okay, but now your history doesnt match your semblance

http://www.rwbyrpg.com

13Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Empty Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) Sat Mar 11, 2017 5:15 am

Akui

Akui
Hello there Dum Prinosyashchiy! We see that it's been awhile since you made changes to your application, so the Staff is giving you a seven day notice: should you not make any changes to this app within seven days from this post, it will be moved to the Inactive Apps section.

Sorry for any inconvenience! ^_^

http://www.discordapp.com/#5424

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