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1Ivory Darkshade Empty Ivory Darkshade Sun Jun 26, 2016 3:47 pm

ShyGuy

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Ivory Darkshade W_d__gaster___human_female_version_by_anarieutrash-d9q7o3b

Basic info
Name: Ivory Darkshade
Age: 19
Birthday: July 7
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Height:5'7"
Weight:135lbs
Face Claim: Human Female Gaster...don't ask. (Undertale)

Stats
STR:3
DEF:4
RES:3
SPT:2
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Major:Combat
Likes:

  • Silence


  • The color black


  • The color white


  • Bad jokes

Dislikes:

  • Being interrupted


  • Being left alone


  • People who ask too many questions

Fears:

  • Fire


  • Volcanoes


  • Death

Overall Personality: Ivory is a weirdo with so many issues that you could probably print out a year’s worth of magazines if you were willing to go through all that trouble. She doesn’t have much experience dealing with people since she’s surrounded herself with books at a young age. She’s not that trusting of others, making her slightly paranoid against strangers…did I say slightly? I meant extremely. If she doesn’t know you and you come at her from nowhere chances are you’re going to get slapped by her many hands. Her dedication to academics is astounding, making her an incredible confident scholar who treats would probable treat others nicely even if there's a massive gap between their intelligences. She isn’t afraid to stand up to others though, especially over things that she believes in. Oh, and if she ever shows you what she's wearing under her dark cloak, that means she trusts you very much and would probably stalk you in your sleep.
Abilities
Aura type: Defense
Aura Color: Black
Semblance: Utility: Creation of Giant Hands - She is able to create up to two giants hands from aura. The hands can float and interact with the environment and an even hold things. They are slow moving and functions like a defense semblance when used to block.
Item 1: Chained Edge - Chained Edge is a large claymore with a chain securely attached to the hilt. The chain is wrapped multiple times around her waist.
Item 2: Dark Cloak (Physical) - Dark Cloak, her cloak is her armor. It's durable and not easilly scratched.
History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by ShyGuy on Tue Jun 28, 2016 2:32 pm; edited 10 times in total (Reason for editing : Remaking and done.)

2Ivory Darkshade Empty Re: Ivory Darkshade Mon Jun 27, 2016 12:41 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Hey welcome to the site ^^ This is a good app but there are a few things that will need fixed. You can't have two weapons as your items, you must have two items of different types. Any two of Weapon, Magic Armour, Physical Armour and Dust. That and your android/weapon as it is could have been used to totally negate damage you take and so isn't allowed as a weapon.

Your semblance also however isn't allowed as it is too close to multi element and telekinesis.

I recommend you take the android as a summon semblance ^^ Filling in the summon template and slotting it into your app, then take a different item one to fill it's place. Bump when done.

3Ivory Darkshade Empty Re: Ivory Darkshade Mon Jun 27, 2016 9:54 pm

ShyGuy

ShyGuy
Richard Lionheart wrote:Hey welcome to the site ^^ This is a good app but there are a few things that will need fixed. You can't have two weapons as your items, you must have two items of different types. Any two of Weapon, Magic Armour, Physical Armour and Dust. That and your android/weapon as it is could have been used to totally negate damage you take and so isn't allowed as a weapon.

Your semblance also however isn't allowed as it is too close to multi element and telekinesis.

I recommend you take the android as a summon semblance ^^ Filling in the summon template and slotting it into your app, then take a different item one to fill it's place. Bump when done.
Telekinesis I can get but multi element? I'm gonna need some explanation for that since Transportation is the farthest I can think off when I think element.

But having something she built as a summon doesn't make sense and if I make it into a summon then what if I wanted to customize it for a certain known battle, like a duel or something else? Has someone ever made a metal statue and made it into a summon? It's already always somewhere, does it put a constant drain on her Aura if I make it into a summon?

4Ivory Darkshade Empty Re: Ivory Darkshade Tue Jun 28, 2016 4:37 am

ShyGuy

ShyGuy
That being said, here. I swapped it to a less complex character archetype.

5Ivory Darkshade Empty Re: Ivory Darkshade Wed Jun 29, 2016 7:33 am

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
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