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Basic info
Name: Fleur (Flora) Aelagari
Age: 18
Birthday: 11/7
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Height: 5'3 (1.6 Meters)
Weight: 112
Face Claim: Drawn - Artist Unknown

Stats
STR: 3 + 1 = 4
DEF: 3
RES: 4
SPT: 2
Aura 120|180 HP

Personality
Major: Combat
Likes:

  • Training


  • Drawing


  • Singing/Peace and Quiet

Dislikes:

  • General Mistreatment of Others


  • Bugs


  • Herself (Deep Rooted Self Esteem Issues)

Fears:

  • Her Father


  • Enclosed Spaces


  • Feeling Alone/Abandonment

Overall Personality: Fleur is very kindhearted, she is soft spoken and timid. Fleur developed a slight stutter at a young age that she absolutely hates (It was just another reason for her father to beat her) Fleur also has a very low self-esteem about anything her related as she usually gets flustered whenever someone compliments her. She typically tries to keeps away from her peers and to get herself isolated... to mixed success of course. Fleur is very protective over people she cares about and hates seeing others get hurt, she's kind of like the overly doting Mom which does annoy some of the more self-assured personalities of people (a trait common among Huntsman/Huntresses) Funnily enough Fleur outside of a battlefield and on one are two completely different people. She is more confident and fierce while fighting and as soon as the fight ends she seems to retreat back into her own head. Fleur tries to remember her reasoning to become a Huntress as her main source of motivation. Her reasoning is simply "To protect those who can't protect themselves"

Character Weapon/Fighting Ability: Martial Arms/Short Sword; Relying on a single engraved Short Sword and her natural combat ability, Fleur is not to be underestimated. Abusive training at a young age by her alcoholic Father and Huntress Mother has taught her how to properly defend herself. Trained mostly in the fighting style closely represented by "Muay Thai" Fleur is a full-contact fighter utilizing most parts of herself while fighting (Arms, Elbows, Knees and Shins)

Her handling with her sword is a little more clumsy but still can prove deadly if given the right opportunity. Fleur usually attempts quick/fast strikes at her opponent before trying to finish with some sort of physical contact usually using her sword as a tool to weaken or throw people off balance.

Fleur traverses the battlefield with a certain soft stepping grace seemingly gliding from spot to spot. She is flexible and nimble in her movements as well due to her small frame and short stature. Depending on her opponent you can expect to see different types of engages, Fleur would fall under the category of "Calculated Aggression" which simply means as it sounds (Gauging the right amount of power and recklessness into a coordinated attack) However due to Fleur's real world experience being relatively very little; she sometimes oversteps her boundaries and endangers herself.

Abilities
Aura type: Power
Aura Color: Whitish/Yellow Hue (When her Semblance activates her aura colors explode brightly for a moment before returning to the soft colors around her)
Semblance: Focused Strike: Fleur can channel her aura into her martial combat attacks or blade for extra damage (Pretty much the reverse of Aura's purpose. Instead of protecting the user, she can reverse it into an attack)[Buffing Strength Modifier]
Item 1: Combat Dress w/Golden Trimmings (Dust Magic Resistance), The dress isn't particularly armor padded, it's more just clothing. However it does have a clutch slot on the back where Fleur holds her sword. The clutch runs sideways on her lower back, this is so the sword can be easily grabbed.  
Item 2: Engraved Short-Sword with this carved into the blade ---> "勇気 美しさ 力" which translates to "Valor, Beauty, Strength"

History and Sample
History:

RP Sample:

Author's Note: The Role play sample could defiantly be longer and is a little weak when it comes to RPing itself. However imo; Fleur is a great character to have someone else there with to bounce ideas off of. I also added an EXTRA category to accurately explain her combat style and prowess.

Anyway... I hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed making it!



Last edited by GetMe2Dance on Sun Jul 31, 2016 12:54 pm; edited 23 times in total

Richard Lionheart

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Hey ^^ welcome to the site.This is a very good app but there are a couple minor fixes. The first is really an easy one, 5 ft 3 is not 6.002 meters. It is 1.6 meters. The next is easy to ^^ Just need a description of what your combat dress covers armour wise and whether it is physical or magic (dust) resistant. Bump when done ^^

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Fixed my silly mistakes! Bump ^^

Thanks!

Edit: I edited the Semblance after reading another biography and realizing the similarities. Changing for more originality, let me know if the new Semblance still works.

Richard Lionheart

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Just specify how that semblance works from an in game perspective ^^ I take it it's buffing str but just to be sure, could perhaps do semblance damage. Bump when done

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Fixed! Bump^^

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Approved ^^

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