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1Crimson Hale (Finished) Empty Crimson Hale (Finished) Tue Aug 16, 2016 9:35 pm

CrimsonHale

CrimsonHale
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Basic info
Name: Crimson Hale
Age: 19
Birthday: October 23rd
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Height: 5' 6"
Weight: 146
Face Claim: Steampunk redhead girl by Yuuza

Crimson Hale (Finished) Steamp10

Stats
STR:2
DEF:3
RES:3
SPT:4
Aura 160|140 HP

Personality
Major: Tech
Likes: Being around tech, Meat...lots of meat, and Motorcycle racing
Dislikes: Bullies, Police, and vegetables
Fears: Water, being dishonored, and Spiders
Overall Personality: Crimson is an inquisitive adrenaline junkie who loves playing with tech. She is always looking for new experiences and new tech. Her time on the streets taught her how to make use scrap pieces to electronics and machinery to make whatever she needs. People often call her aloof due to her constant obsession with her tech and antisocial tendencies. though caring she often has trouble interacting with people.
Abilities
Aura type: Perfect calm: At the cost of 10 aura per use Crimson may make herself perfectly calm for one attack in combat or 5 minutes out of combat.
Aura Color: Bronze
Semblance: Ability to control and manipulate water: Though Crimson is deathly afraid of water during times of extreme duress and fear she has used her semblance in two way in combat.
Offense: using her semblance as an attack she sends out a tidal wave of water that rolls at her opponent that does damage in a 1:1 ratio of damage to Aura used.
Defense: Crimson will envelope herself in a ball of water that acts as magic armor. the armor takes 10 aura per turn and is the equivalent of both tier 1 magic and physical armor. Any electrical attacks done while in this battle position does additional damage.
Passive: Crimson has control over water and outside of battle will mainly only use this ability to keep unwanted water away from her.

Item 1: Custom outfitted bolt action sniper rifle with 16x scope, muzzle break concussion reduction system, and and butt stock ammo slots.
Item 2: first Tier dust: Wind

History and Sample

History:

history:

RP sample
RP sample:



Last edited by CrimsonHale on Fri Aug 19, 2016 1:44 pm; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : adding data)

2Crimson Hale (Finished) Empty Re: Crimson Hale (Finished) Tue Aug 16, 2016 10:05 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Hi I'll be grading your app ^^

So First, you got 1 too many Stat point, max is 12 you have 13

Second, please be more specific about your semblance, what is your character using it for. Don't forget to add the costs of aura if you have more than one type as Attack and Defense.

Third, second item, since your picking dust you need to choose an element (fire, water, earth, wind), you also don't have to specify that it's for your ammunition.

Fourth, your History has to be 300 words minimum, and you also need a RP Sample of 150 words

Bump when ready ^^

3Crimson Hale (Finished) Empty Re: Crimson Hale (Finished) Wed Aug 17, 2016 9:04 am

CrimsonHale

CrimsonHale
bump^^

4Crimson Hale (Finished) Empty Re: Crimson Hale (Finished) Thu Aug 18, 2016 7:18 pm

CrimsonHale

CrimsonHale
done!

5Crimson Hale (Finished) Empty Re: Crimson Hale (Finished) Fri Aug 19, 2016 1:56 am

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
So one more detail, can't start with lightning dust, it's one of the four primal element (Fire, water. earth, wind), change it and you'll be good to go ^^

6Crimson Hale (Finished) Empty Re: Crimson Hale (Finished) Fri Aug 19, 2016 1:44 pm

CrimsonHale

CrimsonHale
wind it is!!!! so excited!!!

7Crimson Hale (Finished) Empty Re: Crimson Hale (Finished) Fri Aug 19, 2016 3:33 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Here you go, approved ^^

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