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Akemi1

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Akemi [Finished!] Wallhaven-200650
From Japanese 明 (ake) meaning "bright" and 美 (mi) meaning "beautiful"

Basic info
Name: Akemi
Age: 18
Birthday: 2/16
Gender: Female
Race: Faunus
Height: 5'4 (164 cm)
Weight: 121
Face Claim: Wallhaven.com (Artist: Dusk)

Stats
STR: 2
DEF: 4
RES: 4
SPT: 2
Aura 170|130 HP

Personality
Major: Medical

Likes: Shopping, Snow/Wintertime, Reading (Particularly Romance Novels and Fairy-tales), Smoothies (Strawberry Banana), Helping Others

Dislikes: Being Disorganized, Liars, Meat, Loud Noises, Summer/Heat

Fears: Humans, Grimm, Heights, Drowning

Overall Personality:
Overall Personality:

Abilities
Aura type: Defense
Aura Color: Alice Blue (#ccffff)
Semblance: Healing Clarity
Semblance Description:  Akemi can cast a “Clarity” Glyph on the ground around her. The Glyph causes a boost of Recovery for those standing inside it, she can also use her staff to channel the semblance and run around healing people through it.  
Additional Semblance Information: Range: (10m), (Heals for 1Hp/1Aura, 20 max)

Item 1: Healing Staff (The Staff is mostly for show but Akemi can channel her Semblance through it and while it’s not generally made for combat she can use it to parry attacks and make weak strikes. The staff is also collapsible for easy portability)

Item 2: Air Dust Vial

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by Akemi1 on Fri Aug 19, 2016 2:20 pm; edited 1 time in total

2Akemi [Finished!] Empty Re: Akemi [Finished!] Fri Aug 19, 2016 1:56 am

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Hi I'll be grading your app ^^

There's one thing that needs more detail and it's the semblance. I'm glad to see a healer as we lack those btw ^^

Just add the range of your glyph (10m) and the rule of healing (Heals for 1Hp/1Aura, 20 max), add that and you'll be good to go ^^

3Akemi [Finished!] Empty Re: Akemi [Finished!] Fri Aug 19, 2016 2:20 pm

Akemi1

Akemi1
Fixed! also I promise my RP Sample could be better, it's rather mediocre. Sorry!  ><

4Akemi [Finished!] Empty Re: Akemi [Finished!] Fri Aug 19, 2016 3:32 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Don't worry, your sample was great, approved ^^

5Akemi [Finished!] Empty Re: Akemi [Finished!] Tue Aug 30, 2016 2:38 pm

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
App moved in order to make some correction, I am at fault here, sorry >.<

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