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1Fenrir Sable Empty Fenrir Sable Tue Aug 23, 2016 9:38 pm

Fenrir

Fenrir
Name: Fenrir Sable
Age: 18
Birthday: 7/28
Gender: male
Race: Okami Faunus
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 120
Face Claim: No clue who this is
https://2img.net/h/i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx243/migeru10/0015shinobi.jpg

Fenrir Sable 0015shinobi


Stats
STR:4 (Brawn)
DEF:1 (Defence)
RES:2 (Resistance)
SPT:5 (Spirit)
Aura 250|50 HP

Personality
Major: Dust
Likes: Sowing chaos, pissing off authority,  quiet
Dislikes: loud people, people abusing their power, people's hive mentality
Fears: people touching his face, failure,  crowds, his past, his power
Overall Personality: Often described as a sociopathic jackass or homicidal sociopath, or even a bag of shattered glass trampled on by a herd of goliath depending on who you ask.  Fenrir hides behind an okami mask and says little if he can help it. Fenrir finds people in general to be uninteresting and stupid, but there have been individuals who managed to earn his respect. His Fears himself and has a habit of holding back in a fight on account of the fact that most of his moves are meant to seriously maim or kill in a short period. He has zero tolerance for anyone who lets themselves wallow in their failures and has a tendency to brutally cut down allies with his words without meaning to. Fenrir has shown to have a less...murderous side to himself, willing to take a hit for an ally if they are vulnerable, he is especially courteous (on the outside) towards women and elderly people. However his eyes scare most around him so he just acts like an asshole.

Abilities
Aura type: recovery
Aura Color: black/grey/red
Semblance: Glyph: Fenrir can create glyphs and control what happens inside them. As a member of the Sable family assassins,  he has access to glyphs of questionable morality. He prefers Stealth, which creates a space of distorted air that mutes any sound made by the person inside and making them appear like a ghost when seen from the corner of a person's eye but still very visible if looked at directly. He often uses this in combination with a disguise since it works best in areas with poor sight lines and lighting. Almost useless in bright areas or if the person steps on something that makes loud noise over 60 decibels. It has an aura cost of 10 auta per use and maintaining and is easily shattered if the person affected does an action that involves loud sounds (i.e. stepping on a dead branch) or contact with another person (I.e. a Melee attack or even just brushing against someone). After the Glyph is shattered or dispelled,  it takes a few seconds to recast it.
Wind glyph: Fenrir can use wind glyphs to boost his speed over short distances, jump higher than usual, glide and soften landings. He can also use wind glyphs for attack and combine them with dust for devastating effects.
Solid Glyph : a Glyph that can be used to create a platform where one is needed. It is created by a combination of an updraft supporting a platform of highly condensed air. Even though it is called a Solid Glyph, it is unstable and only those experienced in fighting with poor footing can stand on it without falling. Used to get to hard to reach areas or can be tilted to form an impromptu shield and swung like a weapon.  However it's not quite durable and a strong blow can shatter it.

Item 1: dust channeling talon gauntlets named Vengeance and Retribution. Ideal for knife hand strikes and dust attacks. They become 3 rings on his center fingers for both hands and two wristbands on each arm when put in storage mode.
Item 2: 2x vial of fire dust


History:


RP Sample:



Last edited by Fenrir on Sat Aug 27, 2016 9:43 pm; edited 26 times in total

2Fenrir Sable Empty Re: Fenrir Sable Wed Aug 24, 2016 3:32 am

Lloyd Vanheim

Lloyd Vanheim
Alright, there's a few things to change here.

First, I'd like a link to the image you used for your FC, just post it alongside your "No clue who this is"

Second, you got 2 stats point over, you need a total of 12 and not 14

Third, I need more precision about your Semblance, what are its uses and a short description of them along with the aura cost for each

Fourth, History and RP Sample needs to be in spoilers and the word count hasn't been met for both of them (300 words for History and 150 for RP sample)

Reply a bump when done

3Fenrir Sable Empty Re: Fenrir Sable Wed Aug 24, 2016 10:28 am

Fenrir

Fenrir
Fixed it bump

4Fenrir Sable Empty Re: Fenrir Sable Wed Aug 24, 2016 11:40 pm

Fenrir

Fenrir
Removed dust Glyph since it seems op in retrospect. Removed lance and blast since they're redundant with wind glyphs, ditto blink glyph. Altered nature of Stealth Glyph.

5Fenrir Sable Empty Re: Fenrir Sable Sat Aug 27, 2016 9:30 pm

Jet Jeyson

Jet Jeyson
Fenrir Sable Jet_Stamp_of_Approval

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