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1Jack Morzon Empty Jack Morzon Sat Jun 07, 2014 10:05 am

rokaius

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Basic info
Name: Jack morzon
Age: 18
Birthday: December 12
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'2
Weight:180
Face Claim: Akihiko (persona)

Stats
STR:4
AGT:3
SPD:4
SPT:1
Aura 80|220 HP

Personality
Group: Warrior
Likes: Fighting, Training, Laughing, Winning
Dislikes:  long rang combat, admitting defeat, crying, cowards
Fears: Shame, Loosing, showing weakness,
Overall Personality:  Jack is a loud and prideful person. He is never shy to share his opinions whether others want to hear them or not. He would never turn down a fight and will always fight head on. " Fists never lie" and " Might makes right" have been two saying that have stuck with him over the years. He would always try to fight a battle that he has no hopes of winning. Retreat and surrender are not apart of his vocabulary.He has little regard for his own safety and would take any amount of blows for a friend. He also looks down on those who favor long range combat. He sees this as doing yourself and who or whatever your fighting an injustice.

To others he comes off as a loud warm person that is fun to be around. But he can be quite ill mannered at times, and always knows just the wrong thing to say at any given moment. He takes training very seriously; he has lost nearly all feeling in his hands from his brutal training regimen.  
Abilities
Aura type: Power
Aura Color: Red
Semblance: Utility: Jacks aura flares around him and an opponent or item are pulled towards him for a few steps. While the target doesn't feel any pain or is caused damage by this it will usually disrupt their balance providing and opening for a follow up attack.
Item 1:  Weapon: A pair of dark red gauntlets made of cool steel. They may look basic but they get the job done and could be expanded upon in the future. They reach half way up to his elbow and are actually quite comfy on the inside. While Jack does his best to keep them clean, one would be able to point and a few small dents here and there showing just how well used they are. Most people use gauntlets as armor or even enchant them, but Jack Prefers to wield them as cold hard boxing gloves. Ones punches tend to hurt a lot more when your fist is covered in steel.
Item 2:  Armor under his shirt Jack has a breast plate made up various metal strings and cords. This gives his vitals protection and lets him keep maneuverability.  

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:
234 words Happy



Last edited by rokaius on Sun Jun 08, 2014 9:29 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Polishing)

2Jack Morzon Empty Re: Jack Morzon Sat Jun 07, 2014 11:52 am

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
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Hi, My name's Leena and I'll be your mod today~

I Like the app so far, I Just see a couple of issues:

Semblance: I only somewhat understand, is it like you materialize your aura? And just to be clear, since you have named the semblance as a utility, It does no damage.

Weapon: the Description seems to be incomplete.

The center tags at the top are broken, you should fix it while you are editing.

Bump when done~

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3Jack Morzon Empty Re: Jack Morzon Sat Jun 07, 2014 6:06 pm

rokaius

rokaius
BUMP! Fixed the top bit, expanded upon the weapon and made my semblance easier to understand. It isn't really meant to damage on it's own just to close a little bit of distance between him and whoever/whatever he is fighting. This would usually used before a punch but the actual move does no damage. So how do you like me now?

4Jack Morzon Empty Re: Jack Morzon Sun Jun 08, 2014 12:58 am

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
So close, just ~one~ little thing. I'm getting a good description of the weapon, but I have no idea what it actually does. There are a number of things a gauntlet could do, I just need you to pick one of them.

Almost there! Bump when fixed

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5Jack Morzon Empty Re: Jack Morzon Sun Jun 08, 2014 1:39 am

rokaius

rokaius
Fixed. Made their use clear as day. BUMP

6Jack Morzon Empty Re: Jack Morzon Sun Jun 08, 2014 12:32 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
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Perfect! Welcome aboard!

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