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Ismael Anduril

Ismael Anduril
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Basic info
Name: Ismael Anduril
Age: 18
Birthday: August 21st
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6’ 1”
Weight: 180 lb
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Stats
STR:2
DEF:3
RES:2
SPT:5+1
SPD: 2
Average
3 attacks
HP 100|200 Aura

Personality
Major: Dust
Likes:
Ismael loves to find a real fight that requires him to think more than just act and many of these times this causes him to have gained new friends and acquaintances in a fight and has really been his favorite and most reliable way of finding dependable friends. Ismael loves making new friends, as everyone deserves a friend, even those who think they don't, yet this is only seconded by Ismael's love of finding new knowledge, as there is so much in the world he has never really gone a day without learning something new.

Dislikes:
Ismael loathes those who are unwilling to try and understand something. There is so much wonder in the world and so much to explore, that those who are don’t experience it more, and the say their way is right is someone Ismael can neither deal with nor stand, as understanding is the key to life. Ismael, has an absolute hatred for those who use people, mistreat people, and even ignore the cries of those who are in need. Not everyone can go to a home when they get cold, they might not even have an idea of when they will eat again, assistance in some way is the right thing to do, in Ismael’s eyes. Yet to this same end, Ismael dislikes the White Fang, not for their ideas, or attempts, yet for their back handed actions and ideas that have lead to many suffering just for a hope the faunus will be in a better position that would be paved in blood, not camaraderie.

Fears:
Ismael has fears from his blurry past as he is always scared he is on the brink of losing control of his power. However he is always willing to take this risk as he has an even deeper fear of dying before he finds the person in his dreams, as he lost most of his memories, the few that show up are of her and forces him to always be thinking of her, but he is also always afraid that he will find her dead. He has also been afraid to have his memories taken from him once more. He is afraid of losing the little memories he has, and he fears the idea he has no idea why he lost his memories, or what he even lost when he lost his memories. He is also afraid of what he'll find when he regains his memories, he is afraid of what he'll find when he looks into his past and is also afraid of what will await him in the future as his past might catch up with him.


Talent: Tactician
Weakness Stealth

Overall Personality: He is a kind and a very deep thinker, yet takes up a cold stoic expression as he is either in thought or is having a daydream. Yet once his concentration is broken he becomes a very kind and soft person who just wishes to find some joy in normality, he always carries himself with dignity and has an air of relaxedness as he is very approachable, yet he can easily drop this to become like an entirely different person when angered. His relaxed nature is replaced with a dominant and very aggressive nature who will not take any crap.


Abilities
Aura type: Spirit
Aura Color: Black
Semblance: A large dark purple hex circle (about 20 feet in radius) starts to form on the ground under Ismael, as his aura creates ethereal black horns on his head, a thick black layer of aura over his face concealing everything except his eyes which turn from blue to red. When the circle underneath the Ismael fully forms anyone within the circle when it finishes or when it is active gets their resistance siphoned (-1 res), and Ismael transfers the energy into power for him to increase his potency with dust (+2 spt), this takes ten aura to activate, while this continually taxes Ismael 20 aura per post for the benefits.

Item 1: 2 vials of fire dust, Ismael uses a book with dust infusable pages to focus his power into a larger medium so he could more effectively extract power from the dust, also he is all about the aesthetic. He glides his hand across the page as the color leaves the dust and the page as then the power swirls around his arm, as Ismael extends his hand out a ball of fire is launched forward and ignites a large tree. The book is a large leather bound, black book with a large red hex circle on it with a strange symbol in the center. The pages are all stained, and seems to have been an older book as the pages seem to look worn from age.

Item 2: A long sword with a small inscription on the hilt, Anduril, which he found to be his last name as he started to regain memories some memories. The blade is silver, and the hilt is otherwise normal with it being a slight gold tint, with a black handle wrap, and a diamond shaped pommel.

History and Sample
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Last edited by Ismael Anduril on Fri Feb 23, 2018 4:35 pm; edited 1 time in total

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Oh sorry no one got to this, should have bump it to show it had been approved ^^ I really like this app, theres' just a couple things I want to check and one thing I see needs fixing.

Alright when it comes to this app the only immediate problem I can see is the semblance;when it comes to how these work first of all the glyph appearing under someone would naturally be avoidable; auto hit ban is not limited to just damaging semblances.  You could potentially make it a radius around you in which people are be debuffed rather than targeted, though you'd have less control over who you were debuffing (everything in the radius could mean allies, though everyone would only be debuffed by 1 res rather than when there is one person within) and still need to wait a post to be sure they have entered the radius before buffing.

Secondly, when it comes to "Lifesteal" or draining semblances we recently put out a ruling on how they would work. As you cannot know for certain your debuff has taken hold you would have to wait until your next post before you would gain spt. How the aura cost would work for this is you'd pay ten aura to attempt the debuff then next post, assuming it'd hit, you could pay ten aura to buff yourself. If you wanted to maintain the rest dubuff also you'd pay ten aura per post for that just as you will the buff. I just want to make sure you know that, when working, you would be paying 20 aura per post for this buff/debuff combo, only ten the first in an attempt to initiate it.

Also you've done it in a cool and detailed manner but I only count two likes and dislikes, and only one fear. You do need to fill these categories ^^ Bump when done.

Bump when done ^^

Ismael Anduril

Ismael Anduril
Thank you for finally finding my app and went over it. I have added the likes, dislikes, fears, and reworked the semblance so it is follows the rules this would include the changes needed to make it fair and balanced.

4Ismael Anduril [Waiting for Approval] Empty Re: Ismael Anduril [Waiting for Approval] Sun Feb 25, 2018 11:23 am

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
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