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1Gris Helki (Finished) Empty Gris Helki (Finished) Mon Nov 09, 2015 10:38 pm

Gris Helki

Gris Helki
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Gris Helki (Finished) W1xo5e_th

Basic info
Name: Gris Helki
Age: 17
Birthday: October 16
Gender: Male
Race: Human (Cyber Prosthetic)
Height: 6'0
Weight: 180 lbs
Face Claim: Unknown OC

Stats
STR:5
DEF:3
RES:3
SPT:4
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Group: Warriors
Likes: World Render, Winning, Duels
Dislikes: Social Congregations, Self-Righteous People, Grimm
Fears: Losing Control of Semblance, Women, Families
Overall Personality: Gris, a loner, he tends to stay away from social congregations, also lacks communicative abilities, but this makes up for his one-on-one combat ability. However, he does have quite the temper, and make some wrong moves, and one will regret it. He is not racist against Faunus, his philosophy is "The world does not care what race you are, it's out to kill you no matter what." , but he will not go out of his way to save anyone from bullying or prejudice, as he is not a knight in shining armor.


Abilities
Aura type: Power
Aura Color: Gray with a Red Outline
Semblance: Berserker, Buffs STR (+2), Decreases other stats (-1)
Item 1: Ultra Greatsword, nicknamedWorld Render, as tall and as wide as Gris (Can be two/one handed), forged by the Blacksmith
Item 2: Prosthetic Left Arm (Can be affected by "Scrambled), is used as a counter balance for World Render. Physically Resistant. Very low amounts of Dust Resistance

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by Gris Helki on Mon Nov 09, 2015 11:30 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Changes in the backstory)

2Gris Helki (Finished) Empty Re: Gris Helki (Finished) Sat Mar 18, 2017 4:35 am

Akui

Akui
Hey there Gris Helki! It seems like this app has collected some dust (no, not that kind of dust, -.-). It seemed like you were pretty much done, too.

The changes you would need are: making your Personality hit the 100-word quota, making your RP Sample hit the 150-word quota, linking your FC in the Face Claim Section, picking whether your arm is Physical Armor or Magical Armor, and picking both a good skill and bad skill from this list here.

You could also probably get away with not taking -1 to all your stats when you activate your semblance and just keep the +2 to STR buff, but if you wanna keep it there for RP reasons than feel free.

If you come back in about seven days and place the finishing touches, you're good to go. If not, I'll have to move this to the Inactive Section.

Sorry for any inconveniences.

http://www.discordapp.com/#5424

3Gris Helki (Finished) Empty Re: Gris Helki (Finished) Sun Apr 09, 2017 3:47 pm

Akui

Akui
I apologize, but due to there being no changes or response in much more than the allotted time, I must move this app to the Inactive Section.

Sorry for the inconvenience.

http://www.discordapp.com/#5424

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