Benjamin Roy Gris

Basic info
Name: Benjamin Roy Gris
Age: 19
Birthday: June 7
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'1
Weight: 220
Face Claim: My own art

Stats
STR:2
DEF:3
RES:3
SPT:4
Aura 200|100 HP

Personality
Major: Tech: Blacksmith
Likes: Concept Design,Cute Animals,and Crafting
Dislikes: Rude Dudes,Bugs,and When a craft doesn't function correctly
Fears:  Being Ignored,Being Hated, and Disappointing those he cares about
Talent: Weaponsmithing
Weakness Athleticism
Overall Personality: Is generally a quiet guy who isn't big into fighting. He likes to keep to himself not really big on strangers but is can deal with meeting new people. He likes to think a lot so research is his forte. He has no problems with anyone or their opinions as long as they aren't rude or forcing them on him or someone else. His main goal is to get through school so he can open up his own armor and weapon shop so he can support the huntsman and huntresses who keep the world safe from the Grimm and bring hope to those in need.

Abilities
Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Purple and Grey
Semblance: Coat of Arms: Ben can overload his aura forming a hard energy construct.(20 AP) The constructs by themselves are weak and shatter quickly or fade away upon losing contact with him however he can make them more durable or last longer by overloading a object with his aura (10 AP) i.e. A short stick will have energy around it in the shape of a sword. He also has some minor telekinetic control over the weapons though they still have to stay within the range of 10 ft. for him to control and maintain them
Item 1: Weapon: Save The King: A small shield that he uses for attacking and defending he throws it around using it in a manner similar to Captain America or Pyrrha. Benjamin is as of right now trying to make attachments for it allowing for better utility. It also has a compartment for holding dust which can be released for attacks.
Item 2: Dust: Tier 1: Wind

History and Sample

History:

RP Sample:

Hello there SomeDudeOther! We see that it's been awhile since you made changes to your application, so the Staff is giving you a seven day notice: should you not make any changes to this app within seven days from this post, it will be moved to the Inactive Apps section.

Sorry for any inconvenience! ^_^

Sorry about the fact that I became inactive I got busy and have finally settled enough to come back here and attempt this again is it possible for me to still use this character

Hey there, welcome back. It's Akui, the person who was going to move you to inactive...but now I'm the person who's going to help you get approved.

So, a couple of things here: one of them is that your Face Claim isn't working properly, and isn't listed under it's section. You'll need to fix those so we can see what you look like and know where it's coming from. :)

Your personality is just under the 100 word count, at 98. I hate to be that kind of stickler, but I'm sure you can fit in two more words somewhere. Once again, being that stickler, but your history is just short by 14 words. I'm confident that you can do it! :D

Now out of the nitpicking and into the more important things, I see that your semblance is pretty cool. Gives me Velvet vibes. This seems mostly a damage semblance...but it's a bit different as it also has some utility and it's not like most semblances that are just one attack and done. First off, making any weapon out of aura, I'm okay with that under the pretense that they normally break. However, using your aura to craft a more long-lasting weapon by essentially enchanting an object with your aura would have to work a bit different: Instead of using a flat amount to conjure a weapon and attack, you would be using aura every post to maintain the weapon's form. However, if that was what you were trying to go for in regards to both with an object and without, then I would say it should be 20 aura a post to control the pure aura constructs and 10 aura per post to control an enchanted object.

As long as you put in that it requires 10 Aura per post to maintain the enchanted object (or, if going that last route I mentioned, 20 aura for pure and 10 for object), and the enchantments make sense (no making a stick into a gun or a ball into a spear) then I see no issues with the core of the semblance. You do need a range though, and 10ft is a bit farther than most people think, but I' okay with allowing that as extending past that causes your semblance to effectively shut off.

Make those changes, and you should be good to go.

I finished it

Sweet, sorry about the wait. Everything looks cool, enjoy your Velvet-esq semblance.

Also, sweet art!

I guess that means that you're...