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Aoi Umi

Aoi Umi
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Basic info
Name: Aoi Umi
Age: 17
Birthday: 08/18
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus
Height:5’11”
Weight:175 lbs.
Face Claim: N/A

Stats
STR:3
DEF:2
RES:3
SPT:4
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Major:Tech
Likes: Inventions, Playing the violin and guitar (though not at the same time), sparring, reading a good book by a fire. Stargazing, experimenting.
Dislikes: Prejudice, racism and bigotry. Those who believe they have no worth.  Aoi hates having his creations taken from him and not given back.
Fears: That the Alizarin family will return to Atlas and wreak havoc through the streets once more.  
Overall Personality: Aoi is lively and intellectual. In fact when Aoi dosen't know something, or gets something wrong he seeks the correct answer and to better himself. He is a calm and peaceful soul mostly. However he despises those prejudice against anyone be it humans against faunus or faunus against humans. Aoi is not against taking up arms against the Grimm and those who seek to harm him, however he against the latter he will attempt to talk them down first unless they're attacking someone defenseless or when the fight is uneven.

Aoi doesn't have issues with his anger, but he has gotten hot-headed a few times. When he does get angry it's something to hold him back. Aoi doesn't stand for those who sit atop the mountain and look down on others. Authority and he sit well when it's co-operative not dictated.

The times to watch for are when Aoi's quiet. A quiet Aoi is dangerous it means he's either too far gone with his opponent, or adversary (non-combat) or he's up to something! Thinking about some experiment or invention, now most of the time this is a good thing, but he does get carried away with his own work.

The trickiest thing about the reptilian is his understanding of his and other emotions. He often seems uncharacteristically different but that's his inexperience with social situations showing true.

Abilities
Aura type: Power
Aura Color: A torrent of shades of blue to show the many colors of the ocean.
Semblance: Aoi hass relied so much on his inventions, capable Aura and findings on Dust that Aoi hasn't really taken the time to discover his semblance.  Even as such he has never felt like he was missing a part of himself.  Aoi knows he will come to understand his semblance, but no is not the time.
Item 1: PRISM Driver!:  The Prism Driver is Aoi's pride and joy based of the concept of the original Prism gauntlets the Prism Driver is a belt that materializes armor based on a catalyst Aoi creates with Dust, Aura and technology. The mixture of the formula has been a delicate process and creating the catalyst for the transformation sequence for each form so far has been a chore, but well worth it.

The Belt is powered by battery cartridges that Aoi creates and downloads the material form into each battery. The Form projects itself over Aoi before being made solid by the Dust and Aura that have been infused into the battery. Prism is an acronym, standing for. Polar, Rock, Inferno, Spectrum, and Mistral. Each of these is the name of a form the belt takes on.

Polar: The first form Aoi created an ice form that is his all around form. With white fur around the neck the suit is black with ice blue accents and lines throughout. The gloves are clawed and the vizor is has ice blue accented bear features on it.
Item 2: (Weapon/armor/Dust, and describe.)

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by Aoi Umi on Thu Jul 14, 2016 3:00 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Just fixing some text blurbs.)

2Aoi Umi Completed Empty Re: Aoi Umi Completed Thu Jul 14, 2016 1:59 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Alright ^^ This is a good app, however, there are a few problems that need sorted. The first is that you only get 12 stat points, then your potential one from aura. Not 13.

Second is that you need to put your semblance in before the app can be approved, whether you know it currently IC or not, and you need an item two.

Third is that, unfortunately, due to dust's finite nature on this site your belt item could not work as described. Dust is an item here that you buy as a consumable and so using it in the way you describe, coating your body and making claws, could be done but it would not be one of your items. There is also no defensive bonus gained from dust. Bump when done ^^

3Aoi Umi Completed Empty Re: Aoi Umi Completed Sat Mar 11, 2017 4:44 am

Akui

Akui
Hello there Aoi Umi! We see that it's been awhile since you made changes to your application, so the Staff is giving you a seven day notice: should you not make any changes to this app within seven days from this post, it will be moved to the Inactive Apps section.

Sorry for any inconvenience! ^_^

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