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1Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Empty Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Sat Jan 07, 2017 6:49 am

Conrad707

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Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] JpujDzo

Basic info
Name: Loden Favre
Age: 19
Birthday: 12/09
Gender: Male
Race: Human, with android hand prosthesis.
Height: 6’1”
Weight: 165
Face Claim: Kent – Amnesia

Stats
STR: 2
DEF: 3
RES: 4
SPT: 3
SPEED: Average, max of 3 hits.
Aura140|HP160

Personality
Major: Tech (Engineer)
Likes: Tools, Tinkering, Lightweight Alloys, Engines, Robots/Androids, Low Brass Ensembles.
Dislikes: Inanimate AIs (e.g. Siri), Prosthesis, Outside contact of prosthetic hand (see history), easily irritable and/or bubbly personalities.  
Fears: Humiliation/Alienation, Suffering, Inability to complete certain tasks.
Talent: Engineering
Weakness Cooking

Overall Personality:
Loden’s personality is fairly average compared to others of his age and demographic. He tends to express serious emotions while his subconscious comically takes everything in stride (read: Deadpool voices). Occasionally the comical aspect of things end up getting turned into words, usually to his disadvantage if it is heard. If he’s lucky, it only comes out as a mumble. Being social is an easy thing to do, as he has an agreeable nature and tendency to monologue over hobbies and ambitions.  

Loden can become easily frustrated with arguments on trivial things, events not going according to plan, and excessively bubbly/irritable personalities. Such personalities are both overwhelming, and annoying to him. He finds traits such as excessive height/shortness to be an odd but appealing charm.  

When Loden goes about tinkering or engineering, he lets the inquisitive part of him lead the way, which can get him into trouble every now and then. While possessing an affinity for technical and mechanical objects, his has a special distaste for inanimate AIs; Loden simply finds them offsetting due to their lack of physical form. He also makes sure to cover his prosthetic hand when out in public, due to a fear of humiliation and/or isolation. Consequently, has a hard time shaking hands, and having others touching his prosthetic augment. It should be noted that this hand is usually in either a pocket, or a black leather glove.

Loden’s admiration of mechanics inadvertently led him to discover Low Brass ensembles. He can’t play an instrument, but he thoroughly enjoys music made by the lower-voice types.          

Abilities
Aura type: Healing (+5HP Per Post)
Aura Color: Dark Green
Semblance: Clockwork Clarity (Utility)
This semblance allows Loden to analyze and deduct information from the inner workings of mechanical devices. This is only done thorough physical contact with the device. Doing so allows him to identify possible functions, strengths, weaknesses, and methods of repair. All devices will demand 10SP per use:

  • 6 Simple machines
  • Small constructs
  • Locks
  • Basic gun/rifle assembly
  • Small Engines
  • Machinery
  • Advanced (multi-form) weaponry
  • Clockwork


Item 1: Weapon Rating 1: Dual Wielded Tomahawks (Green in place of Blue)(TOTAL PHYS DMG +10)
Tomahawk Image:

Item 2: Armor Rating 1: Right Shoulder Armor (+10 PHYS DEF)
Armor Image:
 

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by Conrad707 on Mon Feb 27, 2017 4:51 am; edited 3 times in total

2Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Empty Re: Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Wed Jan 18, 2017 8:41 am

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
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Hello, I'm Leena And I'll be your mod today~

Sorry for the wait, we're still kind of debating your semblance, but we should have at least posted in here. I take full responsibility for that.

What we can tell you is that your semblance needs to follow rules for how much SP it takes to use, since it's easier for us and other members to keep track of it (which makes it better for you, actually XD). It's a 10 SP utility use per post, the way I'm reading it.

I can also say that you 100% definitely cannot use this on androids. We do have player androids and that would become Godmoddy real fast. As for player weapons, the jury is still out.

Everything else is absolutely perfect. If you could fix what we know is problematic, then that might help us in staff reach a conclusion faster.

Again, Super sorry for the wait, bump when done. ^^

~HMLeena

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3Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Empty Re: Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Sun Feb 26, 2017 3:45 am

Conrad707

Conrad707
Bump~

4Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Empty Re: Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Mon Feb 27, 2017 12:44 am

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Can you establish that your semblance requires contact?

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5Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Empty Re: Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Mon Feb 27, 2017 4:51 am

Conrad707

Conrad707
Edited and bumped~

6Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Empty Re: Loden Favre [Awaiting Approval.] Sun Mar 05, 2017 9:31 am

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Okay, /should/ be fixed now

Approved!

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