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1Drake Shade (Awaiting Approval) Empty Drake Shade (Awaiting Approval) Tue Jan 31, 2017 4:33 am

Drake

Drake
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Basic info
Name: Drake Shade
Age: 17
Birthday: March 21
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus (A single black vulture wing over right shoulder)
Height: 6'0
Weight: 175 lbs
Face Claim: Kirito from SAO

Stats
STR 4
DEF 4
SPT 2
RES 2
Aura 140|160 HP

Personality
Major: Combat
Likes: 

  • Solitude

  • Combat

  • Reading



Dislikes: 

  • Emotion

  • Groups of people

  • War



Fears: 

  • Heights

  • Spiders

  • The unknown



Overall Personality: Drake is a careful person, always calculating the odds of survival and making the safe decision, though it may not be the easy one. He is also caring for his friends and defends them against any threat, but its hard for him to open up to others and hides behind a mask of cold indifference to protect himself. He typically sets aside his emotions so they don't interfere with his reasoning, but if pushed far enough, he will let loose and let his emotions direct his actions, though with his semblance, this can be a deadly prospect for anyone in proximity.


Skillful at: Fighting
Lacking in: Fine Art


Abilities
Aura type: Power
Aura Color: Black
Semblance: Emotion Absorption, a buff semblance. Drake is able to feel the emotions of the people around him and then 'feed' off them, taking them into himself and converting it into energy, which he then uses to increase his power, speed, defence, spirit or resistance. However, the emotion he takes in determines what he can buff. Negative emotions allow Drake to buff his power or spirit and positive emotions let him buff his defence or resistance. Speed can be buffed by both emotions.
Item 1: Weapon: Two identical one-handed longswords. The blades are dark red and the hilt is black, with a single vulture wing as half-a-crossguard.
Item 2: Armour:  A black hardened leather jacket with a deep hood.

History and Sample
History:

Spoiler:


RP Sample:

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Last edited by Drake on Sun Feb 05, 2017 12:09 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Forgot to add to the title)

2Drake Shade (Awaiting Approval) Empty Re: Drake Shade (Awaiting Approval) Sun Feb 05, 2017 5:06 am

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Hey, welcome to the site ^^ There are a couple problems with your app so I can't approve it. First of all, and most simple to fix, is that your history and rp samples are not in their spoiler boxes as they should be. Please fix this.

Next, while your FC does not have to have your faunus trait on them and you can detail it as you have in your race, you do still need to have a face claim. Third is that emotional manipulation is banned as a semblance as it is essentially a level of mind control. Bump when done ^^

3Drake Shade (Awaiting Approval) Empty Re: Drake Shade (Awaiting Approval) Sun Feb 05, 2017 12:10 pm

Drake

Drake
Bump

4Drake Shade (Awaiting Approval) Empty Re: Drake Shade (Awaiting Approval) Wed Mar 01, 2017 7:09 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Sorry this took a bit, In regards to your semblance again I have to say no. I would recommend not tying it directly to the emotions of others as there is always going to be even a minor level of mind reading (telling if a person is feeling positive or negative in this case) as well as other problems. Also, in regards to your armour you do need to specify whether it is physical or dust resistant and I do believe your fc is already in use by another player who has been active in the past half year so it cannot be used. Bump when done ^^

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