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1Gabe Nahuatl (Completed) Empty Gabe Nahuatl (Completed) Tue Aug 01, 2017 2:00 pm

Luug

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Gabe Nahuatl (Completed) 5521f9cc6a28f02d23d18c9ec3f0ca68

Basic info
Name: Gabe Nahuatl
Age: 17
Birthday: Some time in March. He doesn't really remember or care.
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus, wolf tail.
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 150 lbs
Face Claim: Izaya Orihara from Durarara.

Stats
STR: 4
DEF: 3
RES: 2
SPT: 3
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Major: Combat
Likes: Any meat outside of the ocean(even if it came from the ocean), his machete named "Juana," watching people get hurt/scared/shocked/disgusted/confused, hazelnuts.
Dislikes: The ocean, turquoise paint in a can, shrimp.
Fears: His mother, anything happening to his weapon, magicians, being deep underwater.
Talent: Stealth
Weakness Swimming
Overall Personality: Gabe's a pretty chill guy, I guess.  He doesn't really know what he wants to do with his life, but he knows he's good at hurting things, so he's sticking with that for now.  He's usually happy as long as he's well fed and has something to do that actually interests him.  Whenever he's faced
with a task that seems boring and/or unnecessary, he does his best to find anything that could get him out of that situation.  When he finds something fun
to do, everything other than that thing is irrelevant and is to be ignored / removed / broken.  When he's got free time he just likes to not be bored.
Being alone with nothing to do makes him stressed out to an insane degree.

Abilities
Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Black
Semblance: A tendril limb that pulls people towards him, or pulls him to something else. Doesn't deal damage to anything, just moves things. The tentacle extends from one of his shoulders, seemingly replacing his arm until it's no longer in use. The tendril gets a +2 strength buff, can throw, grapple, and pull enemies. Can also be used to climb.
Item 1: "Don Juan," his machete that has brass knuckles for a handle.
Item 2: Hoodie with steel plating on the inside. When the hood is put up, a mechanism inside moves a steel mask over his face. This armor was designed for physical damage.

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



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2Gabe Nahuatl (Completed) Empty Re: Gabe Nahuatl (Completed) Tue Aug 01, 2017 2:20 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Welcome, this app is pretty good but there are some things to fix ^^ You do actually need an fc, if you are unaware an fc is the basis for your characters appearance. You pick a picture with a character you think fits, one from a show or even draw one yourself. This doesn't have to be exactly as your character looks, for instance as you have specified your character is a faunus your fc doesn't have to have your faunus trait but that does mean you would have to specify the trait next to your "Race" segment. This is the most major problem though! So you're doing well.

The smaller problems are simply defining if this tentacle limb deals damage on contact or if you have a say in that (you could take it that hits dealt with the limb are an str buff, basically just explaining the effect the tenticle has from an In-RP/Meta standpoint and not just what it physically is) and, I'm assuming, you intend it to stretch/grow in order to reach things so you'd have to state the likes of that as well ^^ Just give a little more detail on it and you're good. Most minority you need to specify if your armour is physical or dust resistant. Bump (post here saying) when done.

3Gabe Nahuatl (Completed) Empty Re: Gabe Nahuatl (Completed) Tue Aug 01, 2017 4:26 pm

Richard Lionheart

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