Quill Darwind (2nd Re amp)

Basic info
Name: Quill "Frost" Darwind
Age: 24
Birthday: 1/25
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'0 with suit, 5'10 without suit
Weight: 312 LBS with suit on, 165 LBS without
Face Claim: warframe operator from Warframe

Stats
STR: 5
DEF: 5
RES:1
SPT:1
Aura 100|200 HP

Personality
Major: Civilian
Likes: His job, his family, and his dog
Dislikes: Argumentative people, bandit, and whitefang
Fears: Loosing self, death, and Failure to protect
Talent: Combat
Weakness Smithing
Overall Personality: Though the suit it self doesn't show any emotions outside of it Quill is a pretty lay back guy, he stays away from any action when he is not operating his suit or in a non combat zone. He normally keeps to people he knows and likes, like his wife who operates her own suit. He stays quiet through out most his jobs only keeping a channel open to speak with any of his friends or love ones while on a mission/job. He also keeps his word to finish a job without killing himself, as long as he gets his money he is fine with the path he takes.

Abilities
Aura type: Strength
Aura Color: Blue
Semblance: Frost: This semblance is all ice based.
(Damage) This semblance attacks in three ways
Snow Ball: Launching a small ice bomb that cause damage within 5 meters
Ice Wave: Sends a wave of razor sharp crystallized ice towards an enemy (Range 10 meters)
Avalanche: Summons large chunks of ice to slam down on enemies with in 10 meters.
(Defense) The user can spawn a large 10 meter dome of protection them self and their group.
(Utility) This semblance can also create items from ice and even ramps/bridges as well.

Item 1: Slash and Stab: A pair of folding blades, the one in the primary hand is called Slash because of how Quill fights by stabbing the secondary one in a person gut then slashing their necks open with the primary one. (Physical)

Weapon:

Item 2: Frost frame: A suit that is design for combat and to wear all the time, the colors of the suit can be change if needed for customization. This suit was design to invoke fear into the enemy when it appears.(Physical)

Armor:

History and Sample

History:

RP Sample:

Couple things bud, first of all as I DMed you; you should put your character's actual face and body in the FC bit. Put your armour in as you did your weapon Next, when it comes to dislikes you've put two groups which seem to fall under the category of enemies for your characters and "Enemies" in general. I recommend either getting rid of enemies and adding one dislike or keeping it and adding two (That way enemies would have examples in bandits and white fang)

Next you have not specified armour type and the wording on the latter thing the suit can do ("The suit is also connected to a system that allows the user to travel back and forth the suit it self and to his home base, the suit stays where it is until the operator returns to it.") Is a bit confusing, I can't tell what you mean. Bump when done

Bump

Okay couple of things now ^^ First of all your fc listing is still what it was prior, thus I assume it is incorrectly sourced? Please rectify this. Second with your armour you have now not included it's appearance, thus what it covers. Just put a spoiler with the image as you did for your first item ^^ Bump when done.

Bump

Approved