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1Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Fri Apr 18, 2014 11:45 am

Jack Stroud

Jack Stroud
Enrollment Form (Student)

http://www.deviantart.com/art/practice-doggie-boy-199006038

Nux On deviant art created this picture all credit goes to this person here


Basic info
Name: Jack C. Stroud
Age: 19
Birthday: July 1st
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus
Height: 5'9
Weight: 175

Stats

STR: 3
DEF:3
RES:2
SPT:4

170HP/130SP

Personality
Group: Gadgeteer
Likes: Hunting, Quiet, heights
Dislikes: being too close (Physically) Poor weapon maintenance, Racism
Fears: Being bullied, Running out of bullet's, Death of himself and comrades.


Overall Personality: Jack is a hunter. But not the same kind we are all thinking of. He hunt's his targets down and has a very serious way of doing things out in the field. But back home he is a little quiet but overall friendly. He is very independent and open to helping others. He isn't exactly book smart but you'll want him on your side for surviving the wilderness. He has a lot to learn but that doesn't make him dumb, he is very observant and a great listener. He hasn't been known to crack jokes but he does enjoy them from time to time. He will always be loyal to his leader but he will still try to advise a better strategy if he see's one but he always goes by what he is told he will rarely stray from rules or law.

Abilities
Aura type: Speed
Aura Color: Light green
Semblance: Wind Manipulation

Defence: At the cost of 10 Aura. Jack can use winds to help him flee from his opponent. Disengaging himself from combat. Jumping to back or off to the side. Winds will assist him gliding him away. (Can only be used once in a post. If used in close proximity with someone else they will move with him. This effect will work on friends or foes.)

Offence: (Wind's Fury) Costs 20 Aura for 20 unresisted damage. a shot that's velocity is increased as heavy winds push it towards desired target. (takes one post to charge Aura for this shot. This shot cannot be effected by UTILITY ability.)

Utility: Can change bullet direction with the use of wind. at the cost of 10 Aura. Of either his shots or his enemies. This is his preferred attack. (only can be used once a post. Can be used defensively or offensively but not both at the same time.)

Item 1: Wraith (20 Rounds) His personal Bolt action sniper. Its and older weapon well maintained but many scratches and minor imperfections show it's seen a lot of combat.Wraith Barrel collapses into itself. More compact and mobile.

Item 2: light armor (no mask) (Physical Defence) http://blog.ubi.com/app/uploads/2013/11/Rec.jpg



History:

Sample:



Last edited by Jack Stroud on Fri Apr 22, 2016 8:21 pm; edited 12 times in total

2Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Fri Apr 18, 2014 12:48 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Hello, I'm Leena and I'll Be Judging you harshly Your mod today~

Personality: you are not meeting to word count here, you are about 50 words short.

Aura: hm, I think you were looking in the wrong place. https://rwbyrpg.rpg-board.net/t4-aura-and-semblance-rules here is the where the aura types are, it is above the section I think you were looking at.

Items: You can only have one weapon, your other item needs to be either a shield or Dust.

History/RP sample: These are two separate ares here. You need a 300 word history and a 150 word RP sample separately.

Bump when completed~ :D

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3Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Fri Apr 18, 2014 1:18 pm

Jack Stroud

Jack Stroud
EDITTED

4Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Fri Apr 18, 2014 1:26 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Okay, Much better. Just a few things.

Item: you do need that second item. either a shield or 5 free posts worth of Fire, Water, Earth, or Air dust.

History/RP sample: These need to be visibly separated, so label one as history and the other as RP sample. History also needs to be 300 words.

bump when edited

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5Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Fri Apr 18, 2014 1:52 pm

Jack Stroud

Jack Stroud
hopefully last edit. If there is anything else let me know

Changed semblance. Let me know if it should be changed or not.

6Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Fri Apr 18, 2014 2:07 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Getting there, getting there.

The biggest thing is that starter weapons only get one form, so you cant have the blade there.

Minor thing that you don't really have to edit for: What are you planning on joining? Student, non student? white fang? This isn't your fault, but we have not added this part to the app yet so, ahaha.

new semblance is fine, if its what you want.

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7Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Fri Apr 18, 2014 2:39 pm

Jack Stroud

Jack Stroud
Currently non student....but becoming one. change added to the weapon.

8Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Fri Apr 18, 2014 2:45 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' 33ff29g

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9Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Tue May 27, 2014 7:24 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
reapproved

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10Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Sun Apr 17, 2016 11:28 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
Reopened for updating

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11Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Sun Apr 17, 2016 11:54 pm

Jack Stroud

Jack Stroud
I hope everything is alright. Edit is complete

change to height and weight and readjustments to new stat's rule

12Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Mon Apr 18, 2016 3:15 pm

Leena Lilac

Leena Lilac
Admin
The way SP (aura) works is more static now, you can only use 20 at any one time. Therefore your semblance would never really use up 50% from one shot.

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13Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Mon Apr 18, 2016 10:58 pm

Jack Stroud

Jack Stroud
Adjusted to semblance to 10%

14Jack  Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Empty Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' Fri Apr 22, 2016 8:21 pm

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Reapproved

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