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1Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 2:33 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Syne Academy Enrollment Form

Basic info:
Name: Jasmine "Rouge." Levesque
Age: Nineteen.
Birthday: October 23rd.
Gender: Female.
Race: Human.
Height: 5,3,
Weight: Never actually says it, but looks around 110-145 (125.)


FC: (Commission preformed by: http://rideovadio.deviantart.com)


Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Request_4_by_rideovadio-dbc2zos


http://rideovadio.deviantart.com/art/Request-4-685422892


Stats:
STR:3
DEF:2
RES:4
SPT:3
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality:
Major: Undecided.

Quote: "I may have been scared, and afraid, before, but now... I'm ready to avenge my Mother."
Likes: Listening to rock music, Playing bass guitar, and sleeping in.
Dislikes: Any form of Grimm, People who discriminate, for any reason, cheating/dirty fighting, self sacrifice, and makeup. (FC isn't 100% accurate, as it has makeup on.)
Fears: Her father, Darkness, and strangers.
Talent: The ability to manipulate others.
Weakness She believes in fighting honorably, while many of her opponents wouldn't.

Overall Personality: She's mysterious, and cunning. Due to her mother's demise, Jasmine has always been shy, and she pushes people away, hence she's afraid of losing them. Her father's neglect and abuse didn't help that either. As she generally distrusts the people she meets. If she were to ever open up to someone, she'd be stoic, and sarcastic, but, she does have a happier side of her, most people just don't see it. She has poor social skills and prefers to work alone. (She'll have to get used to working with a team.) Jasmine lies a lot about her past, most of the lies she says, are about her mother and father. Usually saying her mom left her at a young age, and that her father was just as about okay, as anyone, not revealing his abusive side. She constantly attempts to dodge anything asked about her, that's personal. She doesn't open up to people quickly, and it takes a long time for her to trust people. She also carries herself in a way, that seems refined, and well-mannered, she doesn't slouch, she has a formal way of speaking, and she always delivers manners, even in a causal setting. It's something her aunt taught her. Even though she acts all well-mannered and refined, most people don't take her seriously cause of her high pitched voice.

Abilities:
Something She's Good at. Persuasion.
Something She's bad at.
Dust refining.

Aura type: Speed.
Aura Color: Purple.
Semblance: Basic Control of Rain and Fog.
Armor Form: A black and white metal briefcase, with a Jasmine flower on the front, Inside is a series of springs, gears, and pulleys, allowing for customization, and transformation, to two weapon types. A special feature of the case itself, is that it can be used as a shield in case of incoming fire. The material used to make the case, is as strong as the material used to make the blade inside. It has physical resistance, but is weak to dust-type attacks.
Weapon Form: Upon opening the briefcase, the gears inside weir up to create a specialized steel katana, with an engraving of her mothers name, on the blade. The katana, though once red, is now purple, stylized for Jasmine, it has a black leather sheath, although, not normally used, cause of the briefcase, can be used in the case of needing the blade to be at the ready.

History and Sample
History:
RP Sample:



Last edited by ChaoticIdeas on Fri Jun 09, 2017 2:33 pm; edited 26 times in total (Reason for editing : Finalized OC. Ready for review/approval.)

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2Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 2:37 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
I honestly don't think it's that good. But I'm open to feedback, and I'm trying my best!

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3Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 3:47 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
Going to pipe in here real quick and direct you to the template code that we have See if that helps you with your character okay? Link: http://www.rwbyrpg.com/t6-character-template

4Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 3:51 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Sno Lagu wrote:Going to pipe in here real quick and direct you to the template code that we have See if that helps you with your character okay? Link: http://www.rwbyrpg.com/t6-character-template

I thought I followed the template, I just changed the weapon, part.

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5Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 3:57 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
No no no I am meaning the code itself take this version and copy and paste it somewhere else and then take the code that I am giving you here and copy and paste it into the forum post and erase any fill in your info (in the space that looks like this) as for the img code you copy and paste an image link into it.

Here is the code: vvv

Code:
[center][size=18][blur]Enrollment Form[/blur][/size][/center]

[center][img]IMAGE HERE[/img][/center]

[u][b][color=darkred]Basic info[/color][/b][/u]
[b]Name:[/b] (Full name of your chara)
[b]Age:[/b] (How old is your chara?)
[b]Birthday:[/b] (Don't worry about the year.)
[b]Gender:[/b] (Male or female)
[b]Race:[/b] (Android, Human or Faunus.)
[b]Height:[/b]
[b]Weight:[/b]
[b]Face Claim:[/b]

[u][b][color=darkred]Stats[/color][/b][/u]
[b]STR:[/b]1-5
[b]DEF:[/b]1-5
[b]RES:[/b]1-5
[b]SPT:[/b]1-5
[color=#ff0000][b]Aura[/b] 150[/color]|[color=#0000ff]150 [b]HP[/b][/color]

[u][b][color=darkred]Personality[/color][/b][/u]
[b]Major:[/b]
[b]Likes:[/b] (At least three)
[b]Dislikes:[/b] (3+)
[b]Fears:[/b] (3+)
[b]Talent:[/b] http://www.rwbyrpg.com/t2210-skills-list
[b]Weakness[/b] http://www.rwbyrpg.com/t2210-skills-list
[b]Overall Personality:[/b] (at least 100 words here)

[u][b][color=darkred]Abilities[/color][/b][/u]
[b]Aura type:[/b] (See the Aura and Semblance Rules to know the types.)
[b]Aura Color:[/b] (up to you)
[b]Semblance:[/b] (See Aura and Semblance Rules. Describe your semblance here.)
[b]Item 1:[/b] (Weapon/armor/Dust, and describe.)
[b]Item 2:[/b] (Weapon/armor/Dust, and describe.)

[u][b][color=darkred]History and Sample[/color][/b][/u]
[spoiler=History]300+ Words please.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=RP Sample]150+ words[/spoiler]

6Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 4:00 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Sno Lagu wrote:No no no I am meaning the code itself take this version and copy and paste it somewhere else and then take the code that I am giving you here and copy and paste it into the forum post and erase any fill in your info (in the space that looks like this) as for the img code you copy and paste an image link into it.

Here is the code: vvv

Code:
[center][size=18][blur]Enrollment Form[/blur][/size][/center]

[center][img]IMAGE HERE[/img][/center]

[u][b][color=darkred]Basic info[/color][/b][/u]
[b]Name:[/b] (Full name of your chara)
[b]Age:[/b] (How old is your chara?)
[b]Birthday:[/b] (Don't worry about the year.)
[b]Gender:[/b] (Male or female)
[b]Race:[/b] (Android, Human or Faunus.)
[b]Height:[/b]
[b]Weight:[/b]
[b]Face Claim:[/b]

[u][b][color=darkred]Stats[/color][/b][/u]
[b]STR:[/b]1-5
[b]DEF:[/b]1-5
[b]RES:[/b]1-5
[b]SPT:[/b]1-5
[color=#ff0000][b]Aura[/b] 150[/color]|[color=#0000ff]150 [b]HP[/b][/color]

[u][b][color=darkred]Personality[/color][/b][/u]
[b]Major:[/b]
[b]Likes:[/b] (At least three)
[b]Dislikes:[/b] (3+)
[b]Fears:[/b] (3+)
[b]Talent:[/b] http://www.rwbyrpg.com/t2210-skills-list
[b]Weakness[/b] http://www.rwbyrpg.com/t2210-skills-list
[b]Overall Personality:[/b] (at least 100 words here)

[u][b][color=darkred]Abilities[/color][/b][/u]
[b]Aura type:[/b] (See the Aura and Semblance Rules to know the types.)
[b]Aura Color:[/b] (up to you)
[b]Semblance:[/b] (See Aura and Semblance Rules. Describe your semblance here.)
[b]Item 1:[/b] (Weapon/armor/Dust, and describe.)
[b]Item 2:[/b] (Weapon/armor/Dust, and describe.)

[u][b][color=darkred]History and Sample[/color][/b][/u]
[spoiler=History]300+ Words please.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=RP Sample]150+ words[/spoiler]

I just did it while you typed that XD it looks much much much better now, thank you!

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7Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 4:09 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
Alright you are missing and FC at the top of the code that I just showed you there is a line that says center img] Right here put an image link [/img(I am not putting all the brackets in because then it would activate) And FC or Face Claim is basically what your character looks like. and that is why on the template there is an section that says Face Claim: which is where you put the source of your face claim which means who is this character. Here use one of my characters as and example. Link: http://www.rwbyrpg.com/t1143-lucas-neel-complete

Also I would like to explain how spoilers work. there is a code for History that is a spoiler code it is also in RP sample. The code looks like spoiler="History"] This is where you put your history [/spoiler

This is what an image code looks like when it is done properly:

Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Chibi_chibi_naomi_says_hi_by_r_mk-d59eya5

And this is what a proper spoiler looks like

You can click this:

8Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 4:10 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
Okay you got spoilers down now all you need is an FC

9Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 4:22 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Sno Lagu wrote:Okay you got spoilers down now all you need is an FC


Dunno how to get a good face claim, without someone else drawing it.

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10Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 4:43 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
A face claim can be any anime character or drawing as long as you include where you got the image and an image link in the Face Claim: section

11Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 4:44 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Sno Lagu wrote:A face claim can be any anime character or drawing as long as you include where you got the image and an image link in the Face Claim: section

I know, I just prefer an actual drawing if anything, but I'll upload one for now.

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12Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 4:45 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
I can help you try and find a FC if you need it just tell me what you imagine your character to looks like and I can send a few images to see if you find one you like

13Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 4:47 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Sno Lagu wrote:I can help you try and find a FC if you need it just tell me what you imagine your character to looks like and I can send a few images to see if you find one you like

That's kind of you, thank you!

A small framed, short, (5,2,) skinny, girl, with big amber eyes, and purple pixie-cut hair, there's a couple of black streaks along with her hair. She has a clear complexion, and freckles. She also doesn't wear any makeup of any sort, she doesn't believe in it, and believes that it hides your true self.


2 Things I definitely need.
1. Pixie-Cut hair.
2. Big eyes.

The purple hair and amber eyes don't really matter to me. at the moment. I'm currently working on a drawing for her, and I've also requested more talented artists on deviantart to do one for me.

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14Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 5:14 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
Alright for me the first girl that comes to mind is Yuki Nagato from the Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya and I will include 2 images (and links) of some fanart images and an image of how she looks in the anime

Yuki Images:

These next one are from unknown sources but if you just put the image link in the FC spot it will be fine. As long as it is a drawing really anything can be an FC.

*Note- Some images might be a little big so click on the link if you can't see them. You might have to save them and resize them yourself and upload them to something like photobucket to get an image link that makes it fit in the image code*

FC Options:

Another character than comes to find is Kusanagi Motoko  form Ghost in the Shell.

Kusanagi Motoko:

I hope some of these help you find a food FC

15Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 5:25 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Sno Lagu wrote:Alright for me the first girl that comes to mind is Yuki Nagato from the Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya and I will include 2 images (and links) of some fanart images and an image of how she looks in the anime

Yuki Images:

These next one are from unknown sources but if you just put the image link in the FC spot it will be fine. As long as it is a drawing really anything can be an FC.

*Note- Some images might be a little big so click on the link if you can't see them. You might have to save them and resize them yourself and upload them to something like photobucket to get an image link that makes it fit in the image code*

FC Options:

Another character than comes to find is Kusanagi Motoko  form Ghost in the Shell.

Kusanagi Motoko:

I hope some of these help you find a food FC


Thank you so much! Um did I put the FC down the right way? :o

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16Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 5:32 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Sno Lagu wrote:Alright for me the first girl that comes to mind is Yuki Nagato from the Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya and I will include 2 images (and links) of some fanart images and an image of how she looks in the anime

Yuki Images:

These next one are from unknown sources but if you just put the image link in the FC spot it will be fine. As long as it is a drawing really anything can be an FC.

*Note- Some images might be a little big so click on the link if you can't see them. You might have to save them and resize them yourself and upload them to something like photobucket to get an image link that makes it fit in the image code*

FC Options:

Another character than comes to find is Kusanagi Motoko  form Ghost in the Shell.

Kusanagi Motoko:

I hope some of these help you find a food FC

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17Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 5:36 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
That works yeah nice! I'm happy that I could help you find a FC that fit your character. Once your character is complete either me or a member of staff will look it over and grade it ^_^

18Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 5:37 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Sno Lagu wrote:That works yeah nice! I'm happy that I could help you find a FC that fit your character. Once your character is complete either me or a member of staff will look it over and grade it ^_^

:D

Is there anything you see that I should work on? Or do you know anything I can add? I don't want to ask for approval when I'm not ready :0

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19Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 5:46 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
Well your weapon can only have one from starting out you can later use XP you've gained from being in RP threads to upgrade your weapon to tire 2. Think of it like an MMO you never start out with all the good stuff you got to level up and upgrade your stuff.

*Note- You can have duel weapons if they are the same weapon EX: Duel Pistols*

Also you are able to have 2 items a weapon and item #2 can be either a form of dust which you get 5 free uses before having to by more with the forum's currency Lien or you can give yourself armor. But this armor can be one of 2 types it can either defend against dust or defend against physical attacks

20Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 5:47 pm

Sno Lagu

Sno Lagu
Another note you can have your weapon also be used as a form of armor

21Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 5:48 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Sno Lagu wrote:Well your weapon can only have one from starting out you can later use XP you've gained from being in RP threads to upgrade your weapon to tire 2. Think of it like an MMO you never start out with all the good stuff you got to level up and upgrade your stuff.

*Note- You can have duel weapons if they are the same weapon EX: Duel Pistols*

Also you are able to have 2 items a weapon and item #2 can be either a form of dust which you get 5 free uses before having to by more with the forum's currency Lien or you can give yourself armor. But this armor can be one of 2 types it can either defend against dust or defend against physical attacks

Ohhh. Well I only suppose I'd have the briefcase and the sword, then? And not the crossbow?

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22Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 5:49 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Sno Lagu wrote:Well your weapon can only have one from starting out you can later use XP you've gained from being in RP threads to upgrade your weapon to tire 2. Think of it like an MMO you never start out with all the good stuff you got to level up and upgrade your stuff.

*Note- You can have duel weapons if they are the same weapon EX: Duel Pistols*

Also you are able to have 2 items a weapon and item #2 can be either a form of dust which you get 5 free uses before having to by more with the forum's currency Lien or you can give yourself armor. But this armor can be one of 2 types it can either defend against dust or defend against physical attacks

Cause well I only have one weapon, it just has three forms.

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23Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Tue Jun 06, 2017 5:51 pm

ChaoticIdeas

ChaoticIdeas
Sno Lagu wrote:Another note you can have your weapon also be used as a form of armor

I'd do that. I'm just not good with armor. :o Well I might be.. I'm just not entirely sure of how good I am with describing it.

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24Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Empty Re: Jasmine Levesque. (Complete.) Wed Jun 07, 2017 5:58 pm

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