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CelestialHunterIA

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Character Biography (Celestia Brynhildr Jaeger) <NEEDS APPROVAL> Do5kwj

Basic info
Name: Celestia Brynhildr Jaeger
Age: 18
Birthday: 12/25
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Height: 6"2'/187.96 cm
Weight: 140 lbs/63.5 kg
Face Claim: IA (Vocaloid)

Stats
STR:5
DEF:1
RES:1
SPT:5
Aura 200|100 HP

Personality
Major: Combat
Likes: Hunting, Baking, Painting
Dislikes: Dishonesty, Arrogant people, Grimm
Fears: Lightning, Scorpions, Assassins
Talent: Hunting (Wildlife)
Weakness Speech
Overall Personality: Celestia is a very polite, proper, and very lady-like young woman who is known for her elegant and graceful demeanor. She is also a very indiscriminating and tolerant person who treats everyone she meets with respect and dignity. Celestia is rather serene and tranquil person who rarely gets angry or upset. She is also an extremely passionate person when it comes to her hobbies: Hunting, Baking, and Painting.

However, there are times where Celestia loses her cool. During these times, she will be a lot more blunt and direct with her words. People who discriminate against Faunus tend to draw the brunt of her ire.

Abilities
Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Silver
Semblance: Celestia’s semblance improves her vision while she is hunting. Her semblance allows her to spot targets from a further distance.
Item 1: Weapon: Greatbow (Artemis). Artemis is a greatbow which is 9-feet-long and has a draw weight of 250 lbs. It is silver and white in color and fire arrows that are about 48 inches long. This weapon is powerful but has a slow rate of fire.
Item 2: Armor: Breastplate. It is a standard issue breastplate from her hometown of Aegis Peak. Celestia wears it to protect her torso from physical attacks. It provides no protection for the arms and legs and provides no protection against Dust attacks/weapons.

History and Sample
History:

RP Sample:



Last edited by CelestialHunterIA on Thu Dec 07, 2017 1:07 pm; edited 7 times in total (Reason for editing : Fixing a minor error.)

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Hey bud couple things ^^ First things first you need an item 2, hunter majors are required to have two items it is only citizens who are not. Second "increased senses" ins't allowed as a semblance because it's essentially just an increased dodge ability and such, making reactions otherwise impossible. If you picked a single thing like improved vision allowing you to get a better look from further away, making your eyes basically binoculars or the like, that would be different ^^ Finally you've mentioned "Ancient Dragons" in your history and differentiated them from Grimm. As far as we know actual non grimm dragons aren't a thing in the world of rwby so his needs further specified ^^ Bump when done

3Character Biography (Celestia Brynhildr Jaeger) <NEEDS APPROVAL> Empty Bump Wed Dec 06, 2017 4:27 pm

CelestialHunterIA

CelestialHunterIA
/\ /\Bump. I decided to remove the reference to Ancient Dragons and changed her semblance.

CelestialHunterIA

CelestialHunterIA
BUMP

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
Okay, you also are not up to the required word count on history and personality ^^

CelestialHunterIA

CelestialHunterIA
BUMP

Richard Lionheart

Richard Lionheart
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