Loghan Bloodfall (Needs Approval)( corrected again )

Basic info
Name:Loghan Bloodfall
Age:18
Birthday:16 may
Gender:Male
Race:Human
Height:1m80
Weight:70kg
Face Claim: Tatsumi oga from beelzebub

Stats
STR:3
DEF:2
RES:4
SPT:3
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Major:combat major , student
Likes: work on cars,video games,books
Dislikes: Grimm, Racism against faunus, racism against human
Fears: Deathstalker, lose the control of himself, be surounded by people
Talent:  Vehicle Mastery
Weakness Computer Wizard
Overall Personality: Loghan is someone cold and calculating, through his travels he has learned to be wary of people, grimm are not the only remnant monster. He does not like talking to people whether they are human or faunus Had a hard time because of the two races he prefers to be alone more than anything else. Most of the time he works on his car when he does not track anyone. Inconsiament he seeks the person who could change it. He keeps a child's part of himself that he hardly ever shows. He has a strong notation of justice and he prefers to act rather than rested his arms crossed, leaving killed the criminal If need be. His childish side tells him to go to a hunter academy, he dreams of a better life then he will try his luck despite the risks.

Abilities
Aura type: Power
Aura Color: Smoky Black
Semblance: Wolf skin : The loghan's semblance allows him to turn the damage received in additional strength by 2 point but more loghan takes damage more risk he is transformed. If loghan takes more damage is seeming allows him to become a wolf of human size but if He becomes really angry, he loses his humanity and becomes monster and no longer feels anything even killing does not bother him any more, the only way he becomes himself again is that his aura arrives at zero so he will become himself again put will no longer be protected by the aura.
Item 1: Black Sword named Rise of the wolf made of steel, titanium and chrome its a simple and really strong weapon
Item 2:Blessing of the Full Moon:The trench coat of loghan is armored against physical attacks.

History and Sample

History:

RP Sample:

Yo yo, I'll be grading your app

So there's a few things you'll need to change in order to be approved

-First, you have too much points spread across HP and aura, it's a total of 300 and you're currently at 360

-Next, bounty hunter isn't a major, the one that it would be closer would be the combat major

-You can only have one talent and one weakness, not 3 of each

-Your personality is too short, you need 100 words minimum, you're 20 short

-Your semblance is confusing, but I think I get the gist of it but if you could reword it a bit it would be nice (P.S., "degat" would be "damage"), you can also drop the "aura drains faster when transformed". Also make sure to say clearly it's a STR buff

-You can't start with two weapons, you'll have to pick one of them

-You're history is short on words too, minimum 300, you're at 257

If you need any help you can pm me if it makes it easier ^^

Alright, a few more things and you'll be good to go

-Your semblance is clearer, just note that the "turns damage into strength" will only be for flair and you won't go beyond the +2 STR that the buff gives, just keep that in mind, also I know it's nitpicky but note somewhere on the semblance line that it's a STR Buff so everyone can know at a glance

-You need two items, so give yourself one of the two types of armor (physical or dust resistant) as they are not easy to get later on, nor is dust if you'd rather have that.

Some more changes need to be done, but you're close ^^

-No need for a build-up in the stat buff, you can get +2 from the get-go without having to fully transform into a giant wolf

-Your armor is too complicated, we do simple here, if it's a physical armor, any kind of bullets of melee attack is reduced, if it's dust resistant then all matter of dust attack is reduced. No need for "can't resist sword, etc"

that will be good now i guess

Yep, all good, Approved ^^