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Professor Coal

Professor Coal
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Basic info
Name: Aaron Coal, formerly Mikael Coal
Age: 29
Birthday: 30 september
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 1, 82 m
Weight: 195 lbs
Face Claim: Shinya Kogami, Psycho-Pass

Stats
STR: 4
DEF: 4
RES: 3
SPT: 1
Aura 100|200 HP

Personality
Group: Teachers
Likes: Smoking alone, Being an ass, Kicking ass, Whiskey and Bourbon
Dislikes: Disrespect, Laziness, Boot kissers, Wine and Brandy
Fears: Being arrested, Being killed for no reason, Correcting exams
Overall Personality: The loner type, Coal will usually avoid any chit-chat with anyone as he prefer to keep is image as a "guy without a story". He will usually stay alone in his office, working on personal work or preparing for class. He is able to analyze any situation with an extreme precision to see details that other may miss and also use this to figure out things about people that they keep as secrets. He can tell if someone lies, is afraid has feeling for others, etc... All that just by looking at them. Also, Coal will be an ass, he will probably be the most hated teacher of all Syne and he knows it and won't change his attitude because that's what the children will need. Someone to piss them enough so they'll do their best to get out of Syne the sooner they can, hopefully after graduation. That said, Coal is arrogant, brash, macho and sometimes douchy, all the more to hate. But he's the kind of guy you love to hate.

Abilities
Aura type: Healing
Aura Color: Electric blue
Semblance: Shade/ It's an Utility semblance that creates a perfect double of himself running to a designated area in a range of 20 meters. The Shade won't run in a straight forward line though, it will act as if it has a mind of his own to dodge, move and take cover from attacks. It can even talk to send messages to others. The only thing that the Shade can't do is harm.
Item 1: Immobiliser/Weapon/Inflict Sleep/ A handgun made for immobilization purposes. Disables the neural system in a way that leaves the whole body in a sleep-like state. Coal uses it to immobilize his target before charging on it for some close quarter combat.
Item 2: Poly-carbonated Kevlar Vest/Physical Armor/A ballistic vest that has been modified to protect from melee weapons as well as bullets.

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Last edited by Professor Coal on Mon Mar 16, 2015 9:40 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] Empty Re: Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] Sun Mar 15, 2015 10:56 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] IbyLY2eSVixTkG
Hello~ Admin Eli here to grade your app!

This is what you need to fix in order to be approved.

The minimum word count for personality is 100 words. You are currently at 79. Please flesh out your personality a bit more.

As of this current point in time Paralysis is not a status effect, sorry. I recommend having your weapon inflicting sleep or freezing. (If you want to remain a semi-nonlethal I really recommend sleep, instead of a sleep like state it will literally put them to sleep)


Just fix these up and you'll be good to go!

3Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] Empty Re: Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] Sun Mar 15, 2015 11:58 pm

Professor Coal

Professor Coal
I made the changes you ask, hope it's better...

4Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] Empty Re: Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] Mon Mar 16, 2015 7:14 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Just one nit-picky thing just so there is no confusion with your weapon later and then you're good to go!

Put something like "Inflicts sleep" in brackets or mention it somewhere in your weapon description.

Bump when done~!

5Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] Empty Re: Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] Mon Mar 16, 2015 9:41 pm

Professor Coal

Professor Coal
I made the change, it's mentioned right after the name

6Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] Empty Re: Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] Mon Mar 16, 2015 9:47 pm

Eliara Caithe

Eliara Caithe
Looks good! Congrats on the approval!

Professor Aaron Coal [Completed] Eli_ap13

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